Very nice, LittleWing -- in particular I totally loved your final verse. I read that a couple of times, just to soak it up. Cheers, Kizzo
thanks kizzo...can you tell i was "waiting" that rainy day...
hi kizzo...that smiling waving thingee...it is always so nice when another sees the same picture...great to see you...hope all is well on your side of the world...burrrrrr, cold here...no snow yet...
This poem flowed beautifully and I wasn't really prepared for your ending .... Beautifully done, LittleWing.
Haiku is my weakness. I totally loved this Blog Entry. The beautiful verse, coupled with a lovely picture really was a pleasure to read. Thank you!
I enjoyed your poem, too, LittleWing. I missed reading your work. Take care, Kizzo
thanks b-mental...glad u like it...
I like your poem, and the picture with it is quite fetching
thanks mh...therz nothing like a man who loves you whole just as you are...and, this is for that one...
that was so fantastic. I love the sounds and throaty softness of this one.
hi kizzo...while raking the leaves i saw this picture...
hi kizzo, nice to see you back...
thanks kizzo and virgil...
here at the corner waiting for a light to change green means go...but where? Oooh, I really like numer three.
I especially enjoyed your third verse, LittleWing!
Nice! In particular, I liked "held on till forever showed up". You always come up with really neat poetic phrases, my compliments! Kizzo
Love your haiku (as always!), and the pic totally adds to your entry. Take care, Kizzo
thanks countess...sometimes the photos can be so helpful in conveying one's thoughts...
thanks virgil...appreciate your comments
I like this littlewing. Very nice.