Amazing poem! Just thought I should let you know, though, that you said "dormat" when I think you meant "dormant."
This is really pretty. Why has no one commented on it before?
Gorgeous haikus! You're veeeeeeeeery talented and I'm lookigng forward to more!!!!!
You create amazing pictures and eveything flows miracullously...
WOW! Wasn't this fabulous?! Loved it!!!!! It seemd to me like some Anna Karenina plot - the adulteress and the cheated husband...Haha,just an idea....but the poem was just perfect!
hi kiz...thanks for stopping by...
Your poem takes us from a wild storm to a calm and serene scene ... very cool. I also like the pics you post with your prose, you always pick such good ones!
Awesome stuff -- I LOVE haiku! My favorite of these posted today would have to be the third one about the fox. Why? Because how true, how true! (we see them here, so you really hit home with me today). Cheers and happy holiday, my friend!
Absolutely lovely poetry and a lovely picture!!!
Hehe, what is he angry for? I aboslutely love this, lw! Nik
hi kizzo....i love the piano...always wanted to go back to playing but have yet to try....it makes me like you even more kuz you play...
Your title ties this beautifully! Enjoyed it, LittleWing. AND, as a piano player, I'd have burst into the Chopin Marche Funerale just for his benefit (but then that would be bratty).... oh well...
Lovely haiku's littlewing, no.2 is especially touching.
These are marvelous haikus, littlewing. Such wonderful lines. Especially, "without a weight or worry," "purity painted perfect," and "the tender tune of twilight." Beautiful.
ok it's a new day...and now i feel real silly..thanks for the good thoughts you guys...didn't think it would hit me so hard...i knew it was coming...young, old...geez....all i know is for the first time in a long time i am going to be living alone and i can't wait yet i'm gonna miss the big kid...whose going to shovel all this snow!!!...did it myself yesterday...nearly killed me...ok, i am woman hear me roar...i did it all by myself!!!
Bittersweet. Hugs to you, my friend, for letting go, it is the only thing to do. As for age ... ummmm irrelevent?
Goodness, I thought you were a lot younger. Pretty haikus.
Awh,so sad. )-;
Yeah, same here. But I love the continuity of it. Very nice!!
I like these littlewing, but I have to admit I thought you were a little younger.