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firestarter
04-04-2003, 04:11 PM
thanks admin, i will truly keep that in mind.

fiestarter,

p.s- have you written any poetry your self?

Admin
04-04-2003, 04:28 PM
yes

firestarter
04-05-2003, 06:22 PM
why not share some,
firestarter ;)

Admin
04-06-2003, 01:52 AM
I haven't actually wrote for 2 or 3 years, this stuff is all old.

http://www.online-literature.com/poetry/

Phantom
04-06-2003, 03:16 AM
Good job on those poems admin.
You have alot of talent. 8)

Admin
04-06-2003, 11:03 AM
Thanks, some of them I really like, others... not so much. Some of that stuff I wrote when I was as young as 12 or 13 and I think its kinda corny.

My personal favorites are "The Wideness of the World" "Goodbye Kisses" "The Dark Room" "Wither" and I'm fond of a couple of my sonnets.

I split this topic off from the other one because it was on a different subject.

firestarter
04-06-2003, 04:53 PM
oic, i wasnt sure, i was like i dont remember postin this, lol

Phantom
04-06-2003, 09:02 PM
lmao :D

b
04-14-2003, 05:11 PM
There is some very nice poetry between that, Admin.

ps.

When someone calls himself Admin - a quite anonimous, abstract and object-like name - he doesn't make me think that I'm dealing with a poet. But no wonder: you haven't wrote for three years, you say. Shame on you: you surely do have talent.

I think there are some publishers out there waiting for you.

Koa
04-14-2003, 05:17 PM
wow admin! they are great! what strikes me of your poems is that they are so SIMPLE! i think it's a great goal, to write in such a simple way, but yet meaningful, deep... things are often deep but complicated...or so simple that they have no real meaning... But yours are both simple and deep...i'm not sure i actullay expressed what i want to say but...well 'simple' is the key word ;)



(5 minutes later...;)) Oh my God! "She was beautiful". It's incredible...it's so sweet... it's great great great....great...