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beautiful_heart
07-03-2011, 03:13 AM
Whenever I want to write…

Whenever I want to write something
feelings start erupting in my heart.

but i'm not able to capture them on a paper
then I realised they are not just feelings but
the moments that I have spent with him
which cannot be expressed in words.

Whenever I want to write something
I start looking for my muse
but then i found him in my heart
inspiring me to compose something new.

I spent whole day and night
Wondering what to write
but then i found the reflection of my feelings on a paper
on which i wrote in my abstracted state of mind.

Whenever I want to write something
feelings start erupting in my heart
I lost my heart to the person who was never mine
& dedicating these verses to remember my that wonderful time.

blazeofglory
07-05-2011, 01:28 AM
Whenever I want to write…

Whenever I want to write something
feelings start abrupting in my heart.

but i'm not able to capture them on a paper
then I realised they are not just feelings but
the moments that I have spent with him
which cannot be expressed in words.

Whenever I want to write something
I start looking for my muse
but then i found him in my heart
inspiring me to compose something new.

I spent whole day and night
Wondering what to write
but then i found the reflection of my feelings on a paper
on which i wrote in my abstracted state of mind.

Whenever I want to write something
feelings start abrupting in my heart
I lost my heart to the person who was never mine
& dedicating these verses to remember my that wonderful time.

This is written with a touch of beauty. One word that confused me is "abrupting". I think "erupting' is preferable speaking contextually.

beautiful_heart
07-07-2011, 12:42 PM
Thanks for your comment blazeofglory. I really appreciate that and you are correct it should be erupting not abrupting. Thanks for editing it. :-)