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BienvenuJDC
02-01-2010, 01:16 AM
This is a new challenge. The first person will give the first line and the last line of a haiku poem. The next person will need to fill in the middle line. The challenge is to transition the first and last line.

For those unfamiliar with Haiku
First line: 5 syllables
Second line: 7 syllables
Third line: 5 syllables

Challenge:
The new moon hidden

Awaits the full moon

Completion:
The new moon hidden
Werewolf without lunar fill
Awaits the full moon


The next challenge:
The little inch worm

leaves across the tree

Haunted
02-01-2010, 09:46 AM
This looks like a toughie but I'll give it a shot....


the little inch worm
of the apple's core adorns
leaves across the tree

BienvenuJDC
02-01-2010, 02:00 PM
This looks like a toughie but I'll give it a shot....


the little inch worm
of the apple's core adorns
leaves across the tree

GREAT JOB!! Awesome!!

Oh...and then you must set the next challenge...

I'll give one for you...



Steel and glass rise up

magnificent form

Haunted
02-01-2010, 04:57 PM
thanks... :p

Steel and glass rise up
here's our own Gotham City
magnificent form


back to you:


life on the fast track

left scarring skid marks

BienvenuJDC
02-01-2010, 05:01 PM
life on the fast track
lead to adventurous times
left scarring skid marks

BienvenuJDC
02-02-2010, 10:42 AM
New Challenge:
Clouds darkens the sky

Waves over the sea

mazHur
02-08-2010, 02:50 PM
Clouds darken the sky
frown at the mountains below;
Waves over the sea

BienvenuJDC
02-08-2010, 03:50 PM
New Challenge:
The challenge is set

The clock ran down fast

mazHur
02-08-2010, 04:20 PM
The challenge is set
and before the mouse could move
The clock ran down fast

BienvenuJDC
02-10-2010, 12:42 AM
The dimensional

intricate design

mazHur
02-10-2010, 06:28 AM
The dimensional
garb of sufferings manifests
intricate design

BienvenuJDC
02-10-2010, 11:58 AM
Never the focus

Now on stage exposed

Hawkman
05-08-2010, 11:21 AM
Never the focus
The understudy’s failings
Now on stage exposed