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Dark Muse
01-18-2010, 01:20 AM
The Renga is an ancient form of Japanese poetry that was traditionally intended to be a collaborative between more than one poet. It is from this form that the haiku derived.

The Renga is what is known as a link poem, because it is made up of several different verses, and each verse is meant to reflect along the same basic theme without directly repeating the imagery of the previous verse.

It is constructed in verses which alternate between a verse of 5/7/5 and couples of 7/7 with the pattern continuing.

So I thought it would be fun to start our own on going Renga.

The way it should work is basically.

1st poster: 5/7/5
2nd poster: 7/7
3rd poster: 5/7/5
4th poster: 7/7

and continues as this so on.

It would be kind of cool if each poster would relate their own verse to some image or theme within the previous post.

So I will start things off:


Morning light shines through
dancing within the raindrops
awaken new dawn

MorpheusSandman
01-18-2010, 01:26 AM
[[[Morning light shines through
dancing within the raindrops
awaken new dawn]]]

My mind drips with dreary thoughts
Echoes of last night's sundown

ampoule
01-18-2010, 08:45 AM
My mind drips with dreary thoughts
Echoes of last night's sundown

These thoughts that haunt me
They follow me all around
A nap should clear them

Dark Muse
01-18-2010, 01:05 PM
Within my dreams voices call
these memories will not die

MorpheusSandman
01-18-2010, 09:47 PM
How does one murder
The imprinted ghosts of thought
Kill what's dead and gone

ampoule
01-19-2010, 08:49 AM
How does one murder
The imprinted ghosts of thought
Kill what's dead and gone

tatoos unreversible
memories unbrearable

Dark Muse
01-19-2010, 12:59 PM
Finding no escape
from these marks I always bare
as signs from the past

hack
01-19-2010, 08:41 PM
a last chapter still untold
an epitaph writ too soon

Dark Muse
01-21-2010, 01:50 PM
Stories of my life
turn like pages in my head
predicting the end