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Shalot
02-22-2009, 12:09 PM
I found a goth poem generator

http://www.deadlounge.com/poetry/created.html

here's mine:

the night falls in a heavy, suffocating cloak, entwined are we.
the light for which you sacrifice yourself
flares once, then dies,
swallowed by your obsession.
all hope must not endure.

your love is no more.
how could you abandon me?
demons surround us, crying,
sanctuary.

:lol:

subterranean
02-22-2009, 03:13 PM
:lol: Cool. Here's mine:

Pulled Apart

the night falls without a sound, soulless are we.
the god for which you sacrifice yourself
flares once, then dies,
devoured by your obsession.
all hope must surely perish.

your soul thrives no more.
how could you cause such hurt?
lost souls surround us, crying,
we are fallen.

drexy
02-22-2009, 03:22 PM
what you have done


what have you wrought?
a miasma of blood as affections vanish.
once we drank of bliss,
glad-hearted and untainted,
but your thirst vanished.
a deadened fever of darkness -
drops of blood follow pain, follow bone,
love condemned.
in a haze of vengeance,
i condemn you.

Silas Thorne
02-22-2009, 09:48 PM
It is a night of ethereal pain, a song of really ethereal pain,
wolves vent their pain. The everpresent ethereal one
rises.

Fog shrouds her brooding very ethereal form,
a brooding wrath.

Her silken hair cascades over
pale and delicate shoulders, and her
full really very deeply crimson lips part slightly, to taste the
everpresent vitae streaming from the
pale brooding flesh beneath
her effervescent twilight.

Now a night of darkness,
I smile vaguely as the ethereal darkness claims me, painfully.

1n50mn14
02-22-2009, 09:56 PM
:lol:!!!

what have you wrought?
a dark black shadowy cloud of agony as sentiments writhe.
once we drank of innocence,
wide-eyed and virginal,
but your thirst paled.
a clouded morass of memory -
emotions follow darkness, follow memory,
love dissolved.
in a rush of sorrow,
i condemn you.

a_little_wisp
02-23-2009, 04:56 AM
:lol::lol:

Yeeees!

"Devoid of Love"

the night falls with a silent sigh, cold and alone are we.
(I'm alone with someone else.)
the light for which you pine
flares once, then dies,
swept away by a velvet ebon nothingness.
(Velvet ebon. I feel like Anne Rice.)
all hope must surely perish.
(So saith Sauron.)

your passion throbs no more.
(...*sniggersnigger*)
how could you abandon me?
spirits surround us, crying,
(Creepily)
save us from ourselves.
(This needs quotations.)


Kthnx, I'm going to go to sacrifice a goat now, bye!!

andave_ya
02-25-2009, 12:01 AM
:lol:! I tried hard to make it a good-ish one but look what happened:

Losing Faith


Slender beams of sunlight enter
this darkened church as I kneel,
always silent, always hopeful,
frozen here,
waiting.

Haloed forms wrought in panes of glass loom as
dust dances in the air,
forming an image in my mind,
searing my secret skin.

A reflection on a clock's face.

I raise my head, now kneeling before
this impassive truth.

Dark Muse
02-25-2009, 05:09 PM
consumed

what have you wrought?
a shadow of betrayal as thoughts diminish.
once we savored wonder,
untainted and virginal,
but your desire perished.
a sickening throng of lies -
memories follow death, follow night,
love burnt to ashes.
in a torrent of vengeance,
i condemn you.

motherhubbard
02-25-2009, 05:29 PM
how fun!

Alone in Darkness


the night falls as if slain by the sun, entwined are we.
the salvation for which you sacrifice yourself
flares once, then dies,
swept away by guilt.
all hope must surely perish.

your soul thrives no more.
how could you fail to believe?
lost souls surround us, crying,
sanctuary.

Dark Muse
02-25-2009, 06:52 PM
Well the first time I was stuck between righteous hatred and religious persecution, so the first one I did righteous hatred, and decided to try another with religious persecution

A God that is Yours


Slender beams of illumination enter
this darkened chamber as I kneel,
always a slave, always forlorn,
frozen here,
waiting.

Robed forms wrought in panes of glass loom as
dust dances in the air,
forming an image in my mind,
penetrating my shamed flesh.

Realization dawning on a deathless face.

I raise my head, now defying
this callous truth.

kiz_paws
03-04-2009, 07:02 PM
Ha ha, such fun indeed :nod:

Here's mine:



what have you wrought?
a black cloud of chaos as sentiments darken.
once we savored innocence,
virginal and childlike,
but your desire paled.
a deadened pool of agony -
memories follow night, follow death,
love ground to dust.
in a burst of vengeance,
i still love you.

Thanks, Shalot! :thumbs_up

Cellar Door
03-07-2009, 02:37 PM
what have you wrought?
a smothering indistinctness of misery as affections writhe.
once we shared innocence,
hand in hand and wide-eyed,
but your thirst paled.
a feverish morass of bitterness -
thoughts follow night, follow pain,
love burnt to ashes.
in a torrent of sorrow,
i see you.

wow, some of these (mine) are really bad, but kind of funny