Potatoes
02-20-2009, 02:31 AM
I'm new here. This is my first poem in nearly 2 years >.< Probably a bit rusty. I made it quite simple. Please comment honestly so I can work on them :)
I wish you knew
I wish you knew. I really do.
Hopefully, you’ll say you love me too.
My heart has not felt for 2 whole years
It only served to hold all the hidden tears
You stare at me and flash a friendly smile
For that alone, I will walk 2 thousand miles
Didn’t you notice how strange I spoke?
Stumbling on words, as if I was poked
Everything about you gives me butterflies
Especially when I stare into your deep blue eyes
I tried hiding it from you. I really did try.
Because that darkest corner was where I sat and cry
You were confused by me. What did you do?
Once again, I wished you knew.
It was you who brought along warmth and light
And brighten up this dark, empty night
You were the brightest star, my ray of hope
So I clung onto you as my life-saving rope
This time when you stared, there was something more
Could it possibly be what I was hoping for?
You tucked strands of my hair neatly into place
While I slowly took in the features on your face
“I’m off to find her. The one I truly love.”
Then he raised his head to stare above
I turned away to look at the cold, hard ground
And watch the tears fall without a single sound
You did not notice me crying, the one beside you
So I thought one last time- I wish you knew.
I wish you knew
I wish you knew. I really do.
Hopefully, you’ll say you love me too.
My heart has not felt for 2 whole years
It only served to hold all the hidden tears
You stare at me and flash a friendly smile
For that alone, I will walk 2 thousand miles
Didn’t you notice how strange I spoke?
Stumbling on words, as if I was poked
Everything about you gives me butterflies
Especially when I stare into your deep blue eyes
I tried hiding it from you. I really did try.
Because that darkest corner was where I sat and cry
You were confused by me. What did you do?
Once again, I wished you knew.
It was you who brought along warmth and light
And brighten up this dark, empty night
You were the brightest star, my ray of hope
So I clung onto you as my life-saving rope
This time when you stared, there was something more
Could it possibly be what I was hoping for?
You tucked strands of my hair neatly into place
While I slowly took in the features on your face
“I’m off to find her. The one I truly love.”
Then he raised his head to stare above
I turned away to look at the cold, hard ground
And watch the tears fall without a single sound
You did not notice me crying, the one beside you
So I thought one last time- I wish you knew.