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Bongitybongbong
11-12-2004, 08:22 PM
Punishable one,
For he lost all in his life,
His soul became void.

Jay
11-13-2004, 06:09 PM
Like it, confuses me a lot when I try to think about it. Is he 'punishable one' for losing his life or for his soul being void... or it's both as losing his life made his soul void...
And why 'punishable' at all?

Bongitybongbong
11-13-2004, 11:18 PM
for both and to become void many deaths by him and to him were made

seeker
11-18-2004, 11:48 PM
ellated, empty
spices pinch my guts and brain
emotion is dead

Anna G. Appel
06-04-2006, 07:58 PM
And on the sidewalk,
Was the feathery raven,
Crushed into the grooves.

Uncle Lar
04-02-2007, 04:35 PM
I think, move, and see
with Invisibility
and Courage as guides.

learntodiscover
10-18-2007, 06:42 PM
Punishable one,
For he lost all in his life,
His soul became void.

eeeerrrr??? at first I thaught his punishment was that he lost all in his life, but on second reading I wonder mmmmhhhh. It's confusing but intriguing.

blazeofglory
10-18-2007, 08:27 PM
A rose blossomed
It is not the road that blossomed
The mind blossomed
The road and the mind blossomed together
They are one, indivisibly one.

muchado22
07-21-2008, 04:58 PM
he's punishable, i believe, because he has let everything be lost in his life. thus, his soul becomes void from both the loss and the punishment?