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Jester
11-02-2004, 04:37 PM
Here's an idea... why dont we create a work of art by simply one word at a time... so one person starts and another jsut comes up with the next word.
I'll start with,


You

Scheherazade
11-02-2004, 06:47 PM
You
unfold

Eric, son of Chuck
11-03-2004, 08:24 AM
You unfold its

Scheherazade
11-03-2004, 09:48 AM
You unfold its darkness

Isagel
11-03-2004, 11:57 AM
You unfold its darkness
gently

Monica
11-03-2004, 12:14 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so

Jester
11-03-2004, 03:21 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that

Taliesin
11-03-2004, 03:24 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my

Jester
11-03-2004, 03:44 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind

Isagel
11-03-2004, 04:13 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will

Taliesin
11-03-2004, 04:45 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently

Eric, son of Chuck
11-03-2004, 05:13 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow

Jester
11-03-2004, 05:20 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in

seeker
11-03-2004, 07:31 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its

Scheherazade
11-04-2004, 03:17 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown

Eric, son of Chuck
11-04-2004, 04:37 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy

(is punctuation done on consensus, or is someone going to step up and grammarize this sucker?)

Scheherazade
11-04-2004, 05:46 AM
Maybe those who are adding the last word, or who just has, can do the punctuation depending on their take?

Jester
11-04-2004, 05:03 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song

(i have no clue anyone want to volunteer to punctuate this poem?)

kushi
11-04-2004, 06:39 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song swiftly

amuse
11-04-2004, 06:41 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
wafting -

*oops! same time oh no*

Jester
11-04-2004, 06:42 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely

(there incorporate teh two)

kushi
11-04-2004, 06:47 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling

Jester
11-04-2004, 06:52 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards

Scheherazade
11-04-2004, 08:09 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the

Adger Ellen Poe
11-04-2004, 08:15 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss

Scheherazade
11-04-2004, 08:28 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The

subterranean
11-04-2004, 08:29 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatros

Adger Ellen Poe
11-04-2004, 08:32 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted

seeker
11-04-2004, 09:52 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond

Adger Ellen Poe
11-04-2004, 10:07 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the

Jester
11-04-2004, 10:29 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great

Adger Ellen Poe
11-04-2004, 10:42 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.

amuse
11-04-2004, 11:28 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought

Jester
11-05-2004, 12:42 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to

kushi
11-05-2004, 02:12 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive

Scheherazade
11-05-2004, 11:44 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while

Jester
11-05-2004, 03:13 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you

Scheherazade
11-05-2004, 03:25 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously

subterranean
11-06-2004, 02:39 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide

Ceahorse
11-06-2004, 02:57 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.

Jester
11-06-2004, 03:00 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh

Monica
11-06-2004, 03:09 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why

Jay
11-06-2004, 03:17 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there

Jilla
11-06-2004, 04:51 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase

Scheherazade
11-06-2004, 05:36 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh

Bongitybongbong
11-06-2004, 07:35 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life

Jester
11-06-2004, 09:13 PM
welcome bongitybongbong, I love your name.... :banana:

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my

Jilla
11-07-2004, 06:06 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure

Scheherazade
11-07-2004, 07:49 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh

Adger Ellen Poe
11-07-2004, 08:01 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child

Jester
11-07-2004, 08:53 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of



(I liek how this is turning out, it worked out well wouldn't you say?) :nod:

Jay
11-08-2004, 04:46 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny

(someone should do the punctuation, lol, begins to look ... weird without comas)

Scheherazade
11-08-2004, 08:09 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where

Jay
11-08-2004, 08:24 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is

Scheherazade
11-08-2004, 08:33 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the

Jay
11-08-2004, 08:40 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one

Taliesin
11-08-2004, 10:28 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who

kushi
11-08-2004, 12:27 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought

Jester
11-08-2004, 03:32 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to

Scheherazade
11-08-2004, 04:16 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath

Jester
11-08-2004, 05:21 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy

Bongitybongbong
11-09-2004, 07:57 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma

Jay
11-09-2004, 11:00 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of

Bongitybongbong
11-09-2004, 05:34 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding

Jester
11-09-2004, 06:47 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love

kushi
11-09-2004, 06:50 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love
Tell

Jester
11-09-2004, 06:58 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me

Scheherazade
11-09-2004, 07:33 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell

kushi
11-09-2004, 07:49 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me

Jester
11-09-2004, 11:17 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What

kushi
11-10-2004, 12:34 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets

Helga
11-10-2004, 01:42 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you

kushi
11-10-2004, 03:35 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously

Helga
11-10-2004, 03:46 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide

kushi
11-10-2004, 03:52 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within

Helga
11-10-2004, 03:55 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your

Bongitybongbong
11-10-2004, 05:21 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul

Jester
11-10-2004, 05:24 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell

Scheherazade
11-10-2004, 05:51 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me,

Jester
11-10-2004, 06:19 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell

Scheherazade
11-10-2004, 06:21 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, tell me!

Jester
11-10-2004, 06:33 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What

Scheherazade
11-10-2004, 06:35 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises

kushi
11-11-2004, 12:45 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have

Jester
11-11-2004, 01:33 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been

amuse
11-11-2004, 01:49 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered

subterranean
11-11-2004, 04:55 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!

Bongitybongbong
11-11-2004, 07:49 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why

Jester
11-11-2004, 06:27 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are

kushi
11-12-2004, 02:54 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds

Jester
11-12-2004, 05:40 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so

Bongitybongbong
11-12-2004, 07:27 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious

kushi
11-13-2004, 12:33 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when

Jester
11-13-2004, 01:04 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you

kushi
11-13-2004, 03:57 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go

Jester
11-13-2004, 04:26 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling

Jay
11-13-2004, 06:04 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside

Jester
11-13-2004, 09:00 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the

Taliesin
11-14-2004, 05:40 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams

Helga
11-14-2004, 03:01 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you

Jester
11-14-2004, 06:10 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring

Bongitybongbong
11-14-2004, 06:20 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without

Helga
11-15-2004, 04:02 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without joy

Bongitybongbong
11-15-2004, 04:22 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful

Jester
11-15-2004, 06:00 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annhilation

(might have spelt that wrong, if i did feel free to fix it.)

Jay
11-16-2004, 02:02 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of

kushi
11-16-2004, 04:09 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing

Jester
11-16-2004, 04:29 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions

(spelling ???)

kushi
11-18-2004, 03:11 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried

Jay
11-19-2004, 12:41 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep

Helga
11-19-2004, 05:39 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside

Jester
11-20-2004, 01:00 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!

Helga
11-20-2004, 06:46 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!

Jester
11-20-2004, 05:10 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why

Helga
11-25-2004, 02:09 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness

kushi
11-25-2004, 02:37 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame

Helga
11-28-2004, 03:01 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me

Jester
11-28-2004, 05:02 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and

Jay
11-29-2004, 06:21 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you

kushi
11-29-2004, 07:37 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become

subterranean
11-29-2004, 08:25 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers

Jester
11-29-2004, 10:15 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to

Bongitybongbong
11-29-2004, 10:19 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies






Jester, how do you think this is going?

kushi
11-30-2004, 01:33 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly

Jay
11-30-2004, 05:32 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while

subterranean
11-30-2004, 05:45 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep

Helga
11-30-2004, 07:06 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life

Jay
11-30-2004, 07:35 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different

Jester
11-30-2004, 06:19 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away

Jay
11-30-2004, 06:38 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all

subterranean
11-30-2004, 07:24 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow

Jay
11-30-2004, 08:56 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away

Jester
11-30-2004, 10:06 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with

Jay
11-30-2004, 10:13 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them

subterranean
11-30-2004, 10:38 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me peace

Jay
11-30-2004, 10:54 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I

kushi
12-01-2004, 11:02 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall

Bongitybongbong
12-01-2004, 04:37 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall wither

Jester
12-02-2004, 06:28 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall wither
alone

Bongitybongbong
12-02-2004, 07:12 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall wither
alone until

Bongitybongbong
12-02-2004, 07:12 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall wither
alone until life

kushi
12-03-2004, 11:19 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall wither
alone until life eats

Jay
12-03-2004, 01:01 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall wither
alone until life eats life

Jester
12-03-2004, 06:27 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall wither
alone until life eats life
and

Jay
12-04-2004, 01:27 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall wither
alone until life eats life
and everything

Helga
12-04-2004, 03:50 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall wither
alone until life eats life
and everything
goes

Jay
12-04-2004, 03:54 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall wither
alone until life eats life
and everything
goes wrong

Jester
12-04-2004, 06:27 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall wither
alone until life eats life
and everything
goes wrong, everything

Helga
12-05-2004, 05:20 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall wither
alone until life eats life
and everything
goes wrong, everything
disapears

Bongitybongbong
12-05-2004, 08:17 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall wither
alone until life eats life
and everything
goes wrong, everything
disapears torture

Jay
12-06-2004, 07:53 AM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall wither
alone until life eats life
and everything
goes wrong, everything
disapears, torture is

Jester
12-06-2004, 03:13 PM
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath.
Spicy enigma of unfolding love.
Tell me, tell me!
What secrets
you frivolously
hide within
your soul?
Tell me, Tell me!
What promises have been shuttered
...do tell!
Why are clouds so mysterious when you go
rolling inside the dreams
you bring without,
soulful annihilation of disturbing
concoctions burried deep
inside me!
Why?!
Why
Sadness overcame
me and you become
strangers to allies obligingly
while
our minds keep
life different.
Away with all
pain and sorrow!
Away with them
leave me (in?) peace
I shall wither
alone until life eats life
and everything
goes wrong, everything
disapears, torture is

forever

Jay
12-07-2004, 11:53 AM
That's an end? I mean... it looks it, lol. If it is could we start a new thread? Like maybe... Stanza 2 ;)

Jester
12-07-2004, 05:02 PM
sure.... (ill start it again)

subterranean
12-10-2004, 06:57 AM
What..the end already? at 152th post...???

Jay
12-10-2004, 10:14 PM
Go looky for a thread called Stanza 2 ;)
Ok, here, lol: http://www.online-literature.com/forums/showthread.php?t=3508

subterranean
12-13-2004, 05:48 AM
But Jay, it was only reached 152th post...too short

Jay
12-13-2004, 07:24 AM
I know what you mean, but reading the 'end',

disapears, torture is

forever
it looked like an end (well, to me), and I only suggested that perhaps it COULD be the end, it's not the lenght that matters (take haiku for example), and well, no one said you couldn't continue with this one (but we ARE continuing it, just in another thread and you need to copy/paste less text, makes it more... 'in one piece', sorry, can't remember the word)
Hey, in the end, when there's like... 10? ;) threads (10 stanzas), we could... ok, you (as you like your poems LONG :p) could put them together in one loooong poem (just like the alt. haiku compiled thread).
Still angry with me?

Jester
12-13-2004, 08:05 PM
so what are your interpretations of stanza one? there probably hundreds