Share a Love Poem

[TheFifthElement]

Have you ever written a love poem for someone (and given it to them?), did they like it, or did they think it was terrible? Have you ever been lucky enough to have a love poem written for you? How about sharing them here?

I wrote this poem (which has been posted before) for my husband, and he loved it.

A Perfect Moment

I love it
when you stand behind me
with your hands
on my hips,
and I can feel you
(but not see you),
a solid presence,
warm and strong
connecting me
to this
moment,
and I wonder
can you hear
my heart
beating
a little harder;
can you feel me
waiting,
anticipating
your next move;
and can you sense
my disappointment
as you move
away,
and it ends
(as it always does),

until next time?

Come on, don't be embarrassed, share your love poems here!

[Lote-Tree]

It would be too smutty for this forum Supreme Being :D

[TheFifthElement]

It would be too smutty for this forum Supreme Being :D

I said LOVE Lote, not LUST! ;)

[dmoretta]

Here is one I wrote.

To watch you sleep

I love the way the moon light revels upon your face,
The way I feel when we embrace.
As I watch you sleep, I run my fingers through your hair,
Paralyzed by your beauty, to which few compare.
As you sleep, you seem to smile with glee.
I can only pray that you are dreaming of me.
Staying awake to watch you sleep may sound a bit cliché,
But I could gaze upon your beauty every night and every day.
Admiring your loveliness, which never ceases to enthrall.
When I’m with you, I feel like I have it all.

[Lote-Tree]

I said LOVE Lote, not LUST! ;)

:D ok.

But I was fortunate enough to recieve a love letter. That was before I knew what love was. My cruel rejection of it though still chops at my heart like an axe...

[AimusSage]

I just adore love poems, They make me feel all warm and fuzzy :lol:

Here is one of mine, I posted it here 2 or so years ago, but it was ignored, my love unanswered! :p

Severed

The weakness of the heart
Will see two people part
It is the strength of will
That will make you chill
In ice covered emotion
Basking in blind devotion.

You are not needed here
Just go away my dear
Grab your things and leave
Stop trying to be so naive
It does not suit you well
In your one way trip to hell.

[Niamh]

Okay heres a really short one i wrote back in 2001.( i apologise in advance for it being remarkably bad. I'm better at writing depressing poems that love poems, if you can even call it that!)

I dreamed you'd gone and died
Before you knew how i felt
And All i could feel and think inside
Was how much i cared for you before you died.

[mazHur]

Come , my love, hurry

How can i write a love poem
when my love is far and away
With no sleep in the eyes
how can I dream with open eyes
Come, my love, on an early flight
I have cooked lobsters for you
with oyster and thousand isle sauces
the meal is spread on the table
all is ready except for you
come, my sweet heart, rush
before the dinner becomes stale
and I get tired of stoking air
in the yet warm fire place
come, my darling, come
waiting is becoming unbearable
the heart is thumping like a drum
if you wont come by the first flight
no night will be as terrible as this night
love is impatient and trying
only you and you can pacify it

[firefangled]

Have you ever written a love poem for someone (and given it to them?), did they like it, or did they think it was terrible? Have you ever been lucky enough to have a love poem written for you? How about sharing them here?

I wrote this poem (which has been posted before) for my husband, and he loved it.

A Perfect Moment

I love it
when you stand behind me
with your hands
on my hips,
and I can feel you
(but not see you),
a solid presence,
warm and strong
connecting me
to this
moment,
and I wonder
can you hear
my heart
beating
a little harder;
can you feel me
waiting,
anticipating
your next move;
and can you sense
my disappointment
as you move
away,
and it ends
(as it always does),

until next time?

Come on, don't be embarrassed, share your love poems here!

I remember this one. The love poems of fanciful and brief moments are often the best.


Come , my love, hurry

How can i write a love poem
when my love is far and away
With no sleep in the eyes
how can I dream with open eyes
Come, my love, on an early flight
I have cooked lobsters for you
with oyster and thousand isle sauces
the meal is spread on the table
all is ready except for you
come, my sweet heart, rush
before the dinner becomes stale
and I get tired of stoking air
in the yet warm fire place
come, my darling, come
waiting is becoming unbearable
the heart is thumping like a drum
if you wont come by the first flight
no night will be as terrible as this night
love is impatient and trying
only you and you can pacify it

I like this, Mazhur. For some reason it reminded me of This Flight Tonight by Joni Mitchell

[mazHur]

thank you, fire
atleast you honored my table
with your presence
the one I waited for
missed her flight
and couldn't make up
for my treat
now you and me
will dine together
have a little chat
listen to some music
dance, I am not sure
then suddenly you will look
at your watch
and depart
saying 'good night'
and the next thing
that could be seen on U-tube
shall be me
cleaning the dishes !


There were never oceans, they say,
and I believe them, here in my ship,
giving you shade with its bow, the way

I seek the summer trees at noon and slip
into a small dream where sunbeams play
among the leaves. When it rains they drip

like some strange clock with a different time
than the waves of seconds falling on the world.
I seek neither deception, nor perfect rhyme.

I have the memory of our morning bodies curled
in reflection, our bed drifting in a sleepy present.
Such a splendid sea, our dream sails furled…

Moments are, when the heart has its quarter crescent,
but when all fails you and the rhymes of the sky
strain to meet, do not be deceived by darkness.
It is only your shadow as you move into my waiting arms.

very nice imagery
progressively rhyming the last stanza could have added to the beauty of the poem

[PrinceMyshkin]

Come , my love, hurry

How can i write a love poem
when my love is far and away
With no sleep in the eyes
how can I dream with open eyes
Come, my love, on an early flight
I have cooked lobsters for you
with oyster and thousand isle sauces
the meal is spread on the table
all is ready except for you
come, my sweet heart, rush
before the dinner becomes stale
and I get tired of stoking air
in the yet warm fire place
come, my darling, come
waiting is becoming unbearable
the heart is thumping like a drum
if you wont come by the first flight
no night will be as terrible as this night
love is impatient and trying
only you and you can pacify it

Beautiful!


That certain spot
to the left of your left breast...
The way you’d regress
to the manner
of a sexually precocious girl,
the way you turned off the bedside lamp
the first time you undressed for me
and let me turn it on again.

The time I first entered you,
too soon,
but no matter when
it would have been too soon
and never soon enough...




Jerry Newman © 19Sep07

[Granny5]

I have posted this before but it is how I have always felt.

Dan

This life that you’ve given me
without selfishness and
with great thought
is what I waited for
I give you
my soul within yours
safe from all that would harm me.
My heart within yours
shielded from all danger
by your strong love
my love for you to hold forever
And after I go I will watch over you
till you arrive
I will be waiting to see
you smile when you see me
That special smile you have
for only me.

[firefangled]

thank you, fire
atleast you honored my table
with your presence
the one I waited for
missed her flight
and couldn't make up
for my treat
now you and me
will dine together
have a little chat
listen to some music
dance, I am not sure
then suddenly you will look
at your watch
and depart
saying 'good night'
and the next thing
that could be seen on U-tube
shall be me
cleaning the dishes !


very nice imagery
progressively rhyming the last stanza could have added to the beauty of the poem

Oops! sorry Mazhur, that's what I get for doing this at 3 AM. I must have hit the wrong button for mine after commenting on yours.

[mazHur]

never mind, it happens with everyone
keep up the good work !
chow!

[mazHur]

Hi Prince

thanks.

the sun shines
equally over all things
all things take the warmth of
sunbeams unlike the sunflower
which in its innocence
turns its face towards the sun
wherever it goes
high or low
perhaps it feels
it hasn't yet found
the perfect G-spot !

[symphony]

The only love poem i ever wrote was a quatrina for the form poem contest. And that poem made me think that i definitely should fall in love first, and then try to write something about it. :p

[mazHur]

so did you?

[symphony]

so did you?
Fall in love? Negative. Unless u count dead people (Rabindranath Tagore, Einstein, ...ad infinitum) or objects i'm fond of (my poems' diary, my window-tree, etc. etc.)


*scratching her head* And this is that (only)love poem. I'll make it a bit easier for u by saying- "U can ignore it". ;)

A Romantic Euphony
Memories afresh! I’ve tasted paradise once.
‘Twas all restless lips, skipping beats, candid romance.
Spring was afoot, air flavored full with fresh fragrance—
Ever joyous my soul was, captive in a trance.

Wine cascading down the gold chalice of romance,
Violets cheered, and bluebells offered their fragrance.
Time stood still, whilst I sunk deeper into the trance.
Memories afresh! I’ve knocked on heaven’s doors once!

Doors flew open! That unforgettable fragrance
Gripped heaven’s chambers illumined, touching the trance.
Memories afresh! I have embraced Eden once!
Love flew dove- like, o’er our aromatic romance.

Now I chase the dove, strive to touch the lifted trance,
But ‘tis, alas, long lifted, like you left me once
The spell was broken, dying embers of romance
Shushed; away you flew with the remnants of fragrance.

Once blooming bluebells died, snuffing out its fragrance.
Romance wilted, pale petals brought a fatal trance.

[mazHur]

Fall in love? Negative. Unless u count dead people (Rabindranath Tagore, Einstein, ...ad infinitum) or objects i'm fond of (my poems' diary, my window-tree, etc. etc.)


*scratching her head* And this is that (only)love poem. I'll make it a bit easier for u by saying- "U can ignore it". ;)

A Romantic Euphony
Memories afresh! I’ve tasted paradise once.
‘Twas all restless lips, skipping beats, candid romance.
Spring was afoot, air flavored full with fresh fragrance—
Ever joyous my soul was, captive in a trance.

Wine cascading down the gold chalice of romance,
Violets cheered, and bluebells offered their fragrance.
Time stood still, whilst I sunk deeper into the trance.
Memories afresh! I’ve knocked on heaven’s doors once!

Doors flew open! That unforgettable fragrance
Gripped heaven’s chambers illumined, touching the trance.
Memories afresh! I have embraced Eden once!
Love flew dove- like, o’er our aromatic romance.

Now I chase the dove, strive to touch the lifted trance,
But ‘tis, alas, long lifted, like you left me once
The spell was broken, dying embers of romance
Shushed; away you flew with the remnants of fragrance.

Once blooming bluebells died, snuffing out its fragrance.
Romance wilted, pale petals brought a fatal trance.

Ah, what a beautiful and subtle piece of poesy ! Iliked it.

Love you should if you want to live a life. You cannot die with the dead ones, No. that's insult to one's faith !

You have somewhat saddened me with your poem and the quotes on the header. I don't know whether you were in a 'real' trance or just ''fainted''?

Have heart, my dear, God's earth is not as small as his heaven.


love

[TheFifthElement]

the sun shines
equally over all things
all things take the warmth of
sunbeams unlike the sunflower
which in its innocence
turns its face towards the sun
wherever it goes
high or low
perhaps it feels
it hasn't yet found
the perfect G-spot !

I love this mazHur, it's cheeky and nice, from now on I will smile when I see sunflowers :)

firefangled, where did your poem go?

[mazHur]

thanks, Fifth, or liking the poem. Watching sunflower is good for the 'inner heart' !


Love Bird

I heard a love-bird sing
a song of love and spirit
from her innermost heart
in the endless cosmos.......
then suddenly something happened
the strings of her lyre
shimmered and quivered
the tune got changed
the love-bird continued singing
the same melodious song
but the tenor switched to bass
tremelo-on resounded
mixed with the shriek of violin
sounds of ukulele, guitar,mandolin
banjo, bongos and drum
in solemn symphony
as if in an opera
the melodious song
so heartily sung by the love bird
sounded so soothing to the ears
drenched the atmosphere with music-
but 'twas sung on a different track-
a different pitch
the track and pitch of a questioning mind
I had to close my ears!

[symphony]

Ah, what a beautiful and subtle piece of poesy ! Iliked it.

Love you should if you want to live a life. You cannot die with the dead ones, No. that's insult to one's faith !

You have somewhat saddened me with your poem and the quotes on the header. I don't know whether you were in a 'real' trance or just ''fainted''?

Have heart, my dear, God's earth is not as small as his heaven.


loveI didnt have a trance :( that's the problem. I love all terrestrial and exterrestial things. Which means I love people too. But falling in love with anyone special has always been, and is, difficult (for me).
(Sounds shallow and mean and braggart of me, but i didnt find anyone smart enough to fall in love with yet! :( the smart ppl are always either too old or just dead! :bawling: duh!)

[mazHur]

I didnt have a trance :( that's the problem. I love all terrestrial and exterrestial things. Which means I love people too. But falling in love with anyone special has always been, and is, difficult (for me).
(Sounds shallow and mean and braggart of me, but i didnt find anyone smart enough to fall in love with yet! :( the smart ppl are always either too old or just dead! :bawling: duh!)

Hi symph

Hmmm, I didn't know you were a bit of a philosopher as well !

I would like to reply to your feelings in verse. Read and enjoy !

wipe off your tears, baby
I cannot see these dewy pearls
trickle down your rosy cheeks
with no one near to kiss them
and make your impala eye
gleam with the joy of love


worry not, my dear
you will surely fall in love one day
you will suffer trance any moment
your love has not yet ascended
more than a few rungs up
on the ladder of kundalini


'think not, my sweet,
thinking sends young people to grave''
Move and act in this living world
tiny shrubs and rushes won't shade you from sun
take shelter under an elm or an oak
Or, leave something for the fate to decide.


'there's a time for everything,' baby,
the freshness of your youth and beauty
is just for a day in the realm of life
only the lucky ones see the starry evening of life
the aspirations of youth or beauty swim in the void


take heart, my young little friend,
you are not shallow, mean or braggart
you are a normal business woman like others,fine-
calculating your profits and losses
in bargains of love and lovableness
nothing is extra-ordinary in your mind.

love !

[Pensive]

Actually, I have already posted it in the forum but wouldn't mind doing it again. Mind me, I haven't written it for someone specificically, just have expressed my views on love (believe me I am not that much optimistic in life though :p)

Love Will Find A Way

Beneath the stars
Beyond the moon
Along the river
Across the sea
On the earth and in the sky
In any truth or in every lie
Sung by birds
Dreamt by trees
Hidden in the books
Blooming in the flowers
In rainy season in shape of rain
Travelling through every track like a train
Everywhere; here or there
In any form or like a storm

Love Will Find A Way!

[mazHur]

sure it will given the determination and drive you have for it (I mean love)
'Magnificat anima mea Dominum' 'My soul magnifies the Lord'.
let 'zeitgeist' prevail !

[ampoule]

Night Watchman

You left me there in my dreamy sleep,
but not before you tucked me in with
a blanket pulled to my chin.
I felt you pause, your light touch to
the soft smile of satisfaction upon my lips,
and you left, to get sleepy.
Later, I must have coughed quietly in my sleep
for you came running...are you alright?
Climbing in beside me, covering me,
you said....I must be sure.

[mukta581]

Life for me's a waiting game.
Yesterday, today the same.
But wait for you I would forever.
Hoping that we'll be together,
In the end I cannot wait.
But only God can tell our fate.
I worked so hard to win your heart.
But you had mine right from the start.
To wait for you it feels so worth it.
You're beautiful, you are so perfect.
You opened my eyes, helped me to see.
How God's great love could set me free.
When I'm with you it feels so right.
You're all I see, nothing else in sight.
Some say that I'm wasting time.
But I know one day you'll be mine.
Many roadblocks we've been through.
But one day we will say "I do."
Until that day I sit here waiting.
My love for you is never changing.
A special love you gave to me.
I sit here waiting patiently.
For you to come back to my arms.
I'll keep you safe and free of harm.
You must be sent from up above.
You showed me how it feels to love.
Until the day we're gray and old.
My heart is yours to have and hold.
You make me feel so good inside.
I'd wait for you until I die.

Wen i say "i luv u" bliv it coz its tru, wen i say 4ever it mins i wil nver leave u nd wen i say gudbye promise not to crycos wen i say gudbye its d tym dat i'l die...

[dramasnot6]

Oh, that was so beautiful Mukta....I loved it.

[mukta581]

I can't describe this feeling,
It's a never-ending ache
My innocence is peeling,
For made clear is my mistake

You block out what I'm saying,
For you've heard these cries before
The price, you keep on paying,
For you could not love me more

You ask me why I'm crying?
For you just don't understand,
"It's killed me all this lying!"
I scream as you raise your hand...

You send my body sailing,
As you smash me to the ground
You're deafened by my wailing,
Then left begging for a sound

You gawp at me, just laying,
Then you give me a little shake
For my life, you are now praying,
You gasp, I finally wake

You've got so good at faking,
For no-one would ever know
That inside you are breaking,
'Cause you just can't let me go

You say this is the ending,
But your voice is filled with doubt
Your heart's in need of mending,
'Cause you're hooked; there's no way out!!!!!!

[NikolaiI]

My love I wait for you in this place,
Longing only to see your face,
For you to push me up against the trees,
Take me down upon the grass,
Let us be wed like two grains of sand,
Fused into glass for eternity,
With the sun shining out of our soul.

Let the sun wrap its arms around me,
Let me get lost in your embrace,
Let me get lost, let's go get lost.

Blue you sparkle like a mirror for the sun,
And I am only waiting for our good time.
You're the love I've always wanted as mine.
Staying high, my love for your is a lifetime.

Let us be wed like two leaves in the air,
We were grown in the heat of stars,
And these blazing ruins are our resting ground.
Blue you sparkle like a soul of the sun,
Your love is a lifetime,
And the fire in your embrace
Burns the air clean like snow,
Staying high is easy with the love in your eyes,
I need more than myself this time.

Let us be wed like two stones in the wall,
The sparkling of your soul in my eyes,
Let us be wed like two souls of the sky,
And fly like a bird in free fall.
Let me drink your love through a samovar,
Let me get high on your pure air,
Let me get lost, let's go get lost.

Let us be wed under cover of the sun,
Your dress as white as snow-
Under cover of the sun, your dress as white as snow,
The sun shining out of our soul.

[mukta581]

Sweet Surrender!!!!!!!!
As I close my tired eyes and struggle to sleep
Uninvited thoughts pierce urgently into my mind
The realization that I'll never touch your perfect face
In no way feel the gentle touch of your finger tips
Only dream of your entrancingly warm embrace

For I can never surrender my yearning love to you
It's firmly locked deep inside my passionate heart
With the single key lost in my throbbing soul
I can't help but wonder what you truly glimpse
When you look deep within my tranquil essence

As I open my weary eyes from exhausted sleep
The cold hard fact of reality quickly penetrates
You will never know your heart belongs to me
And that I belong wrapped in your caring arms
How my endless dreams of us are oh so sweet

The faithful day when I can finally release
All my engaging dreams and my passions
I hope it travels through your glistening eyes
While its slowly enters your innocent soul
That would be my sweet surrender

[NikolaiI]

Storm gods dance on the roof of the house,
enthralled with the activity within.
Thunder claps and gusts of wind copy cat a smaller play,
of two cats on a kitchen table.

Alas, I am the stranger that disappears into the sand,
I was a stranger and old man even as a child,
A hooded scholar, and intellectual,
Who'd traveled a million miles.

The sky is filled with pink, blue and white clouds,
The road to the endless, dusty highway stands at the gate.
Rain will not come for many months more,
And there is nothing to eat for many more miles.

Meanwhile, an ivory statue lights a blue flame.
Surrounded by pines, and forest, for many miles around,
Drinking in love in the sunlight,
A figure caught in pause, and seen through a fisheye on the ground.

And then, in a play of light on the grass,
A single moment is born,
A rare and precious moment-
the first in fifty years.

Two souls stand separate, alone in all the world.
By many barren lands and seas divided,
One in desert beyond the end of the world,
and the other in a garden beyond time.

To be bound together, beyond all things?
A love in shadow is hidden from mortals.
a moment occurred, and in the history since,
all have held their breath for a second occurrence.

[mukta581]

Broken
Broken hearts, love's deceit,
pieces fall down to my feet.
Broken promises, love's a lie,
puddles form from tears I cry.
Broken dreams, love's illusion,
sorrowed cause of your intrusion.
Broken hope, love's a game,
doesn't last, ends the same.
Broken sleep, love's the cause,
digs at me with sharpened claws.
Broken spirit, love of sorrow,
stolen now is my tomorrow.
Broken life, love is lost,
Broken now and that's the cost.

[NikolaiI]

"do not tell anyone, no one is able to understand us."
"we are different, no one is able to understand this."
It's true. It's the truest part of what can be known.
You and I are alone together, and before god we are alone.

"Dry your eyes on the wind, we have arrived outside time at the place god lives."
"The world is created around us, this moment, and before anything was, this is."
The sky is my home, and the clouds of the sky are my shackles.
Blue is all around me, but different is the colour of love that has entered my heart.

Close your eyes, and let my words wash over your soul.
I am alone- living dead without you-
Though I see the face of god, I am placed in a war
between heaven and hell.
Who could hold out long?
Your words restore me to glorified peace,
And to life, which I never knew,
til I tasted it from your lips.
In every mile I travel,
There are new heights, and new abysses.
Something of heaven and hell.


If we ask for heaven, we
may know the truth;
which is beyond us,
the world, and time.
But this separates us from
the world by a gulf of
darkness, and demons grab us
to tear us apart.

So now you understand,
That I understand your heart.

"I cannot make the words perfectly, but everything and more is true."
If you give me your heart, it
will be held by one
who always has you in his eyes.

By one who knows what it means
to be at peace,
-who knows it only invites
greater disaster; this is the change
of things.

When I close my eyes, I am not
here anymore.
The walls of no prison confine me,
having fallen to dust years ago.

I am not in this present time-
I'm alone, with you, in the future.


This time is not real, the world has not been created yet.
There is no life without you.
I never knew life til I tasted it from your lips,
And if the world takes you it would better take my last breath.

When I met you, I first knew what was real-
Those moments were before time, not touched by time,
The existed before I was born,
And those moments I was remembering, and your perfect form.
This is why the world is created when we first embrace,
And everything revolves around it.
But if it is not in my destiny,
Then there's no life for me.

[mukta581]

("do not tell anyone, no one is able to understand us.
"we are different, no one is able to understand this."
It's true. It's the truest part of what can be known.
You and I are alone together, and before god we are alone.")very nice Nikolil, nice poetry!!!! Take Care

[NikolaiI]

This time is not real, the world has not been created yet.
There is no life without you.
I never knew life til I tasted it from your lips,
And if the world takes you it would better take my last breath.

[mukta581]

If I could have just one wish,
I would wish to wake up everyday
to the sound of your breath on my neck,
the warmth of your lips on my cheek,
the touch of your fingers on my skin,
and the feel of your heart beating with mine...
Knowing that I could never find that feeling
with anyone other than you.

[mukta581]

I wrote your name in the sky,
but the wind blew it away.
I wrote your name in the sand,
but the waves washed it away.
I wrote your name in my heart,
and forever it will stay.

[dramasnot6]

Those last two were so sweet mukta

[NikolaiI]

Pay no attention to my psychotic mind.
What I see, oh, what I see,
A million paths to destiny,
god, as if under the sea,
and all things sadly tinged with envy.

I came to heights where no human stood,
and visions, which I see all the time,
like the neural framework of an overmind,
whisper without sound,
"it sneers at the grassy ground."

But this is what I see: it is
earth, sky, and heaven.
Meaningless words which will not convey
a universe infused with meaning.
Perfect words, whose only crime
is that we are all insane.

So love, is it sane?
I love her, this I know.
The reason passion is all consuming,
well, is there a reason?
It's like asking the reason for water or rain.

[NikolaiI]

"The day you appeared I lost my heart
To you, to love.
And from that day I cannot part
From you, from love."

It is like asking the reason for water or rain.
I love you, my life and my soul.

I will always keep your words in my soul,
I am fully empathic to you.
I give my soul but you are the only
one who returns it to me.

I cannot speak our love here,
but I cannot breathe without you.
Visions dance across my mind,
and I am never without you.

I cannot say the love you have for me.
I cannot say what your words mean to me.
I cannot say the formless words,
though in visions I see it all.

I cannot say it in a way that is fair-
nothing does justice to the phrase 'you are real.'
I cannot say your love that binds my soul,
binds it to heaven and sky.

I cannot speak our love here,
but I cannot breathe without you.
But then, I am never without you,
which is good, because I cannot see without you.

I first tasted life from your lips,
and I know nothing, except that I love, and I am in love,
and nothing compares with this.
I live for your kiss.

I am fully empathic to you,
but I cannot breathe without you.
I cannot speak our love here, since
nothing does justice to the phrase 'you are real.'

[NikolaiI]

O Love, blind me,
but cleanse me with thy breath,
I am nourished by the soul.
O wake me,
lose me in thy peace.
-in love with the truth of the soul.

I am forlorn, and long
for home, which has gone away.
But in thine heart a temple shines
above all, and guides the way;
I long to stay.

O love's lute,
soothe me with thy notes,
show me the face of thy master,
take me higher,
faster.

O love's soul,
bring me news of the sky,
renew the soul within;
thy essence breathes my blood,
as I let thy spirit win.

O love's warrior,
thy heart is pure,
and footstep sure,
thou crosseth many mountains,
to heed love's lure.

O love's god,
let us begin;
you shine through everything
like glitter;
your spirit sings.

My love,
you bring me closer to god,
and you cleanse my spirit,
mind and body;
and I see you in all things.
I love you more than everything.
And everytyhing is just
a mirror
for your soul.

[mukta581]

Patience in love
My love, I patiently wait
And have everlasting faith
So sure you come one day
And let you do what you may,
Enjoy to do in your life

No matter I feel lovelorn
And broken, I move on alone
Not disturbing , knowing
You are happily enjoying
Somewhere with someone

I cannot hold you so tight
And then I try to fight,
With my bursting heart
Wondering if love is an art
Of patience or deep pain

[kiz_paws]

Your first poem, Nik, was beautiful, and what really was incredible was

I cannot speak our love here, since
nothing does justice to the phrase 'you are real.'
Loved it! :thumbs_up

In your second poem I liked the different ways you have made your plea to love, very moving. the line 'you bring me closer to god' was reminiscent of a NIN song, I really like that expression. :)

Mukta, your poem I enjoyed very much, and the last two lines ["wondering if love is an art of patience or deep pain"] were extremely profound! Very well done, indeed. :thumbs_up

[dramasnot6]

O Love, blind me,
but cleanse me with thy breath,
I am nourished by the soul.
O wake me,
lose me in thy peace.
-in love with the truth of the soul.

I am forlorn, and long
for home, which has gone away.
But in thine heart a temple shines
above all, and guides the way;
I long to stay.

O love's lute,
soothe me with thy notes,
show me the face of thy master,
take me higher,
faster.

O love's soul,
bring me news of the sky,
renew the soul within;
thy essence breathes my blood,
as I let thy spirit win.

O love's warrior,
thy heart is pure,
and footstep sure,
thou crosseth many mountains,
to heed love's lure.

O love's god,
let us begin;
you shine through everything
like glitter;
your spirit sings.

My love,
you bring me closer to god,
and you cleanse my spirit,
mind and body;
and I see you in all things.
I love you more than everything.
And everytyhing is just
a mirror
for your soul.


Aww,this one just stole my heart Nik!



HAPPY VALENTINES DAY to all those romantic poets on litnet!

[mukta581]

Im Here For You!!!!
If ever you shall leave this place
I won't forget your precious face
If one day that you shall die
Wait for me while in the sky

If you ever need to cry
I'll help you find the reason why
If ever you're in great despair
Don't forget, i'll still be there

If love is down and hate is high
I'll make you smile...I'll really try
If you want to run away
I'd run with you for sure, ok?

If ever you would get in strife
I'd sacrifice my very life
If you should lose your angel wings
I'll help you fly and drop my things

If you would find it hard to stand
I'm always there to hold your hand
If i would die i'd sit and wait
For you upon the golden gate
Don't forget my words so true
I'll always be right here for you.

[mukta581]

I Am Not Yours!!!!
I am not yours, not lost in you,
Not lost, although I long to be
Lost as a candle lit at noon,
Lost as a snowflake in the sea.

You love me, and I find you still
A spirit beautiful and bright,
Yet I am I, who long to be
Lost as a light is lost in light.

Oh plunge me deep in love -- put out
My senses, leave me deaf and blind,
Swept by the tempest of your love,
A taper in a rushing wind.

[kiz_paws]

Two very sweet poems, mukta. :)

In I'm Here For You, the sentiment was so pure, so dedicated ... loved it. In particular I liked
If you should lose your angel wings
I'll help you fly and drop my things
I Am Not Yours!!!! was interesting, with some phrases that were magical in my opinion

Lost as a snowflake in the sea and
Swept by the tempest of your love,
A taper in a rushing windGood stuff! :thumbs_up

[mukta581]

Your Love, For Me?
What is your love, for me?
An equation equal to infinity.
Like a word means everything is possibility.
And a place full of history.

Your love is the air that keeps me breathing,
Shelter that I need for living,
My water to keep me not thirsting,
And a feeling that always burning.

Because of your love I am complete.
It is the reason why I need to live.
And the reason of my happiness,
But also of my sadness.

[mukta581]

You're the love I can't regret

You're the love I can't regret
even tough stars fall in the sky
And you left me wondering why
still I love you
that's a thing I can't deny

You're the love I can't regret
even we're apart your always near
always in my thoughts, forever in my heart
I'll keep you in here, you were never apart

You're the love I can't regret
I missed you so much
your kiss and your touch
do you hear my call
to catch me when I fall

You're the love I can't regret
That even you left me in a misery
You're always the one I want
and even if that you're gone
you're still the one I love

[Lovergirl]

Hi all, this is the 1st time im sharing my poems with people other than my family, could you please tell me what you think!
Thanx


My love,
your hold on me,
is ever so tight...
it lets me know,
this thing we have it must be right.
every moment spent thinking of you,
is a moment of happiness.
hope and joy fills my heart,
and smile crosses my face...
your blue eyes beaming,
glistening in the light.
my heart is yours,
treasure it...
nurture it...
and more importantly,
love it.
for i am yours,
forever and a day.
they say...
till death do us part,
for death is the only thing that truly can.
i will love you till my very last breath,
till death do us part...

[mukta581]

Still I dream of you!!!!
It has been a while
yes, I guess that's true
but when I close my eyes
still I dream of you...

A heart once filled with love
now drifts on clouds of grey
petals slowly fall
cascade to disarray.

Trees once lush and green
no longer baring fruit
barren..slowly wilting
dying at the roots.

Words of love spoken
drift among the trees
memories lie scattered
caught upon the breeze.

Long lonely nights
merge to empty days
the sun no longer shines
since you went away.

It has been a while
yes, I guess that's true
but when I close my eyes
still I dream of you....

[mazHur]

Still I dream of you!!!!
It has been a while
yes, I guess that's true
but when I close my eyes
still I dream of you...

A heart once filled with love
now drifts on clouds of grey
petals slowly fall
cascade to disarray.

Trees once lush and green
no longer baring fruit
barren..slowly wilting
dying at the roots.

Words of love spoken
drift among the trees
memories lie scattered
caught upon the breeze.

Long lonely nights
merge to empty days
the sun no longer shines
since you went away.

It has been a while
yes, I guess that's true
but when I close my eyes
still I dream of you....



lovely :)

[Haven]

W E I R D
Wonderful feelings I have being with you
Everywhere we go is so totally new
I know that this is just a generated view
Realised by pixels and computer graphics
Doesn't make it less real than molecules and matter

I took this from my entry in the 'write a weird poem thread' because it is a love poem.

[Granny5]

Pushing all thoughts away
Till I'm full of only one
A voice, words, an essence
Praying that the fullness within me
Travels across the many miles
Laying a hand on the phone
I wait