"Her"

[KipptheCool]

Here's one of my poems, it's called "Dreamer".

Can you picture the last time you fell asleep?
The second your eyes shut into a temporary unconciousness?
There you prepare for the next day - an early morning's start.
The night grabs your heart and prepares it for an overnight rollercoaster ride.
This brings you through an adventure of various themes.
Good, bad.
Funny, sad.
Might make you happy or make you mad.
Jealousy, confusion and all the rest.
You wake to the charming voice of mother - waking you up for school.
Now there is a day ahead of you.
Shrug the night's exitement off and ready yourself for tonight.
A whole new scavenger of life's recollections.

What do you think?

[KipptheCool]

A little piece I wrote.

She dances in glowing lights.
Her hair - brushing the crystals of a vast night sky.
Her eyes twinkling - the jeweled stars of her ever so sweet face.

[TheFifthElement]

Hello KiptheCool - it's a nice neat little poem. I hope the girl you wrote it for enjoyed it.

[Bakiryu]

How beautiful! I loved this romantic description.