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Dobber
06-11-2007, 12:23 AM
This is my second post, If they make you smile or laugh then I've made your day better. Please tell me if I was succesful.


The door opens.
"Don't be nice to Timmy he's been bad today." Says Tom as he walks in.
I stop preparing for my next class and see little Timmy from primary 2 walk in. He looks frightened, he's looking around the room but doesn't seem to see anything helpful.
"Sit Down!" Yells Tom.
Timmy looks at the chair then at me, then at Tom and finally sits down.
"You were BAD today Timmy!" "Are you happy?!" Asks Tom.
Timmy shakes his head apparently understanding the question. In fact he is one of the smarter kids.
"Are you going to be better tommorow?!"
Timmy doesn't understand that but nods his head. Smart Kid.
I decide to join In by slamming my pencil down and yelling at Timmy.
"Tom where do you want to go for LUNCH!?"
Timmy nods again.
"How about getting some chao mian?!" Responds Tom.
"I could go for chao mian today!!"
Still nodding, but starting to look very frightened.
"I hate this disipline ****!" Yells Tom
"I know it's the only bad part of the job, these kids are awsome!"
"I love these kids!"
"So do I"
at this point we turn to Timmy and Yell.
"WE LOVE YOU TIMMY"
Timmy starts crying and we start laughing because of were we are in life.
Tom opens the door for Timmy.

The next Day......
"Timmy was great in class today."
"Ya he gave me a big hug this morning."


Was it hard to follow or understand?

tulysg1982
06-11-2007, 01:29 AM
its a nice story, good try.

kiz_paws
07-30-2007, 10:06 PM
I liked the idea of following dialogue to get the gist of a story line. Good job. :)