formality hater
05-17-2006, 04:04 AM
Hello friends,I recently read an article about the hardships faced by the senior citizens of our society so I wrote this poem.Hope yo'll like it :cool:
I am expecting all of my friends to comment on it.
I AM STANDIMG DISMAYED IN FRONT OF MY POSSESIONS
Now you may surrender,
or I shall renounce,
the things won't change a bit
Neither your cries nor my yells,
can calm the sorrows which found me
The thunder when claps,the howls I hear
they might leave you all aghast
For me they aren't the sounds unheard,
for I let them all to bind me
The words you uttered,
or what I said,
I bet they are inane,
The sense of a bliss,
the fancy of your hearts,
took you to the way unknown
And then yet again,
I am standing with pain,
asking for something invain,
Oh my sons what have I done,
to bear the running tears
You have just shattered the trust which I had,
by ruining the lives of many
Should I assume,
that there was a flaw,
A flaw "I" made in your trainning
so what can I say,
I am standing dismayed,
discouraged in front of my possesions
I am expecting all of my friends to comment on it.
I AM STANDIMG DISMAYED IN FRONT OF MY POSSESIONS
Now you may surrender,
or I shall renounce,
the things won't change a bit
Neither your cries nor my yells,
can calm the sorrows which found me
The thunder when claps,the howls I hear
they might leave you all aghast
For me they aren't the sounds unheard,
for I let them all to bind me
The words you uttered,
or what I said,
I bet they are inane,
The sense of a bliss,
the fancy of your hearts,
took you to the way unknown
And then yet again,
I am standing with pain,
asking for something invain,
Oh my sons what have I done,
to bear the running tears
You have just shattered the trust which I had,
by ruining the lives of many
Should I assume,
that there was a flaw,
A flaw "I" made in your trainning
so what can I say,
I am standing dismayed,
discouraged in front of my possesions