Opposites...

[shinigami]

I am black,
He is white.
I am the colors,
Yet he is my light.

We are plain opposites,
As plain as the eye can see.
But when we are together.
There's naught but harmony.

We are polar oppsites,
As yes and no can be.
But we thrive in each other's love,
Desperately.

For we are polar oppsites,
As clear as night and day,
Yet together, the harmony of twilight.
I love you, is all we can say.

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(A/N): i am the colors, he is my light.. meaning.. How can u see colors w/o light???
Please review...

[TBtheG]

I like the poem, but I would have added more powerful imagery.

[shinigami]

Yes.. I do see your point.. it does seem to be lacking sumthing... Thank you! and may the God of Death be merciful upon your soul.