i hate you

[spally]

i hate you
i hate everything about you
the way you look at me
the way you talk to me
even the way you hold me
i hate it when you say my name
when you pull me close
i hate your eyes
i hate your smile
OMG i hate you
so why are you all that i think about
cause i hate you so much i love you
your eyes
your smile
your voice
your touch
when you pull me close and hold me
i love you so much it hurts to hate
i don't wanna be with you
but i can't stand to not be
i hate you
you stupid a$$
why can't you see
that i love you so much its killing me inside
you need to die
but if you did
my soul would die with you
why do i hate you with such passion
but love you with such pain
.............screw this
....i love you

[Xamonas Chegwe]

Spally,

I'm sorry to say this because I doubt it's deliberate, but this reminds me so much of the poem that Kat reads out at the end of "10 Things I Hate About You", that I can't help but think of it - here it is for comparison:


I hate the way you talk to me,
and the way you cut your hair.
I hate the way you drive my car.
I hate it when you stare.
I hate your big dumb combat boots,
and the way you read my mind.
I hate you so much it makes me sick;
it even makes me rhyme.
I hate it,
I hate the way you're always right.
I hate it when you lie.
I hate it when you make me laugh,
even worse when you make me cry.
I hate it that you're not around,
and the fact that you didn't call.
But mostly I hate the way I don't hate you.
Not even close,
not even a little bit,
not even at all.

And I'm afraid to say that I prefer this poem; for all it's juvenile rhymes, it's got more structure and a certain quirkiness that yours lacks. You have a nice idea but unfortunately not an original one. Sorry.

And I hate you for making me admit that I watched that film!

[jon1jt]

I sense we got ourselves a copy cat in the house!

[naomi moon]

Yes I guess that's a copy cut.