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Phoenix_Tears
10-29-2003, 08:05 PM
Maybe it's true
I've nothing but ice in my veins
Because of people like you
Only causing me pain

Confusing my emotions
Thinking i feel
Confusing my tears
Are you certain their real?

Sindhu
10-30-2003, 10:53 PM
"Confusing my tears
Are you sure they're real?"
Lovely finish. Doubt and challenge in a great mix.

Phoenix_Tears
10-31-2003, 12:21 AM
Thanks. i liked that line best too, but i wasn't sure if it would be a good ending..

Phoen-x