Stabbing myself in the back

[Phoenix_Tears]

Lying in the dark
Covered in your marks
Memories of you
When there was nothing i could do
Nor say
To take any of the pain away
Thinking of your words as you remind me of all i lack
As i step back

Into the mirror and down the rabbit hole into hell
My soul to sell
For a moments breath untainted by your lies
For a decent something as my disguise
from your words, reminding me of all i still lack
As i stab myself in the back

[Dyrwen]

Damn fine work. That's about all I can really say..

[Phoenix_Tears]

thank you *bows*
i like this one very much, hm.. i think it might make a decent song

[Dyrwen]

Yeah.. it does have a good song feel to it.

[Phoenix_Tears]

i was thinking that, but i dont think i will add another part to it
i like it like it is, but maybe i should write it a chorus...n/m

i guess another verse wouldn't kill me