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Isagel
10-23-2003, 04:54 AM
To Jennie

It would be easy
to fall
for the girl
with eyes like goldengreen opals.

Easy
like
falling of a tight rope.

Because she does not know
how beautiful she is.
Sindhu
10-23-2003, 04:57 AM
The last two lines are PERFECT!
Isagel
10-23-2003, 05:11 AM
Thank you!
I´m glad you like those two ones especially since I was happy with them, I trouble finding the really right word in english...But I settled for "beautiful".