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AutumnsBlueprints
10-19-2003, 03:00 AM
Need some critics to read this

Fields to run through,
soft grass to tickle your feet,
trees for shade and trees for beauty,
sunsets for the artists and sunsets for the lovers.
Bright moon and bright stars relfect off the lakes.
illuminating lovers in the night.
When eyelashes fall and shooting stars burn out
lament and sorrow are for yesterday and never are tommorows.

AbdoRinbo
10-19-2003, 01:41 PM
Autumn, I'm going to send you a Private Message later on tonight.