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AbdoRinbo
10-15-2003, 03:58 AM
I've prayed.

I've said: God, I'll pour my soul out to you. Rescue me.

But how? I had a vision of purity:

God was in daddy's razor.
Jay
10-15-2003, 05:22 AM
Okay, talk about suicide :(. Or maybe I'm just jumping to wrong conclusions. Sorry for intervention...
fayefaye
10-15-2003, 06:09 AM
hmm.. is it about suicide? Are u one of those ppl who think that life's a dream?
AbdoRinbo
10-15-2003, 12:16 PM
It's in no way suicidal. I'd at least use my razor for that. ;)
Jay
10-15-2003, 01:11 PM
You funny little villain :D .
Well, then I don't get your poem. And suddenly find myself wondering if it's a bad or a good thing ;) :D
den
10-15-2003, 08:14 PM
Maybe Margaret found God...

Life a dream? I don't know, sometimes my dreams make no sense to me, so that makes sense because sometimes the simplest of things also confound me.




I've prayed.

I've said: God, I'll pour my soul out to you. Rescue me.

But how? I had a vision of purity:

God was in daddy's razor.
den
10-15-2003, 10:29 PM
Upon further reflection, scratch that last comment about Margaret Abdo, now Iknow.

I found godd at the bottom of haagen dasz container last night! wooohoo!
Jay
10-16-2003, 04:11 AM
Not so funny... sorry Den.
Hope that Margaret found God Abdo :(.
AbdoRinbo
10-16-2003, 04:35 AM
Den and I talked about the poem earlier, so I'm not offended. She's just a smart-alec, and nothing----not even death itself----will change that. ;)

About Margaret . . . she did find God.
Jay
10-16-2003, 04:39 AM
Glad to hear that Ab.
AbdoRinbo
10-17-2003, 12:43 AM
Den, was there a hidden message down there? And did you have to dig through layers of ice-cream swirls to get to it?

God is so predictable . . . :rolleyes:
surf boy
10-17-2003, 02:23 AM
AbdoRinbo, your poetry sucks!
Isagel
10-17-2003, 03:22 AM
I like the style in this poem. Strong and clean. Not a syllable or word that isnīt necessary.

Somehow it reminds me of Sylvia Plath. And I like her too.
Jay
10-17-2003, 04:56 AM
I kinda agree with Isagel. Sometimes all the poetic stuff in poetry is overrated... not that I don't like poetic stuff ;), but as in everything, there are differences, you just have to (or should) find out how to understand various ways of expressions.

Surf boy, don't mean to be rude, but if you're going to be posting in the manner of your first post, you're going to taste your own medicine, as we kinda stick together even if we have different opinions (and I personally don't like it when someone's offending my friends :evil:, not that I think Ab's going to be offended) ... there was one like you, long time haven't heard of him.

Sorry Ab, again speaking for somebody else that's not me... couldn't help it :(.
den
10-17-2003, 09:09 AM
:D Oooooh! testy interloper of one post so far... boy, let's see if you're a match for Abdo... :P




AbdoRinbo, your poetry sucks!
surf boy
10-17-2003, 02:12 PM
Quiet, dame, it's none of your goddamn business.
surf boy
10-17-2003, 02:14 PM
AbdoRinbo, you're the load your mom should have swallowed.
Jay
10-17-2003, 04:47 PM
You want something in particular to tell to AbdoRinbo or just piss us off? You know, you've succeed as far as I'm concerned. You're no match for Ab, you know?
surf boy
10-18-2003, 04:16 AM
I'm only playing with you, Abdo, you know I love you.
Jay
10-18-2003, 05:29 AM
8) much better... watch your attitude "boy" :evil:
AbdoRinbo
10-19-2003, 12:29 AM
Isn't life swell, surfboy?
fayefaye
10-19-2003, 01:10 AM
that kid's got spunk. he should post more often.