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Weeping Willow
12-09-2005, 06:01 PM
Well it's my first one i publish here so tell me what you think.

Sad world

I don't know the future
But i know the past
Anybody is lucky
If they manage to last.

I know the future
Because i know the past
It's exactly the same
Just no one ever last.

It's a sad world inside a world
Inside a book inside my head.

It feels like a truck
Going towards you
And you just stare at it
And there is nothing you can do.

It's a sad world
Everybody wants to die
It's a sad world
All we do is sit and cry.

Hell fights with heaven
But no one ever wins
I can feel the pain inside me
Burning from within.

It's a sad world
Everybody wants to die
It's a sad world
All we do is sit and cry
It's a sad world
Everybody wants to fly
it's a sad world
Everybody are so high
They fly the sky is
Raining fire down.

rachel
12-17-2005, 09:31 PM
Very powerful feelings and i have tears in my eyes. It is a song of our people, a song of the person living alone in a big city apartment. It is the song of the person married to the wrong one, of someone just holding on in the midst of a war.
You are a wealth of emotion and good observation Weeping Willow. I bless you in the midst of all you have been thru and are going thru to remember what Aragorn said to the son of Hamma when they were facing so many orcs that all was over really before it began. "There is always hope" said he. And there always is. In the big picture until al is finished there is no big winner but one by one each of us can take a stand for good and peace and true love and compassion and leave a mark that all the explosives and hate in the universe cannot wipe away.
Keep writing please, and share it with us.