dont ask!

[right_and_gone]

this kinda just came to me last night, so i dont know. feedback please.

there is no peace.
no one man to forge happiness in me.
so many emotions. but one that is isolated.
fear, so much fear

rightandgone

[vikstar]

I think it's really thought-provoking, but I do feel that you need to add to it so that we really find a bit more out...it's frustrating not knowing more about the situation.

Good luck!

Vicki

[den]

Would you like technical feedback? or emotional? I'm not techie but I know emotional... and your line...

no one man to forge happiness in me.

that makes me want to cry. It's an absolute I still cling to, hope for. You can't possibly be old enough to feel this way... :(