another shared poem thread...complete the thought...

[smilingtearz]

OK!..dunno how i got around starting this...but here's another shared poetry thread...put down ur thoughts randomly in form of a four line stanza and try to get the rhyming sequence something like a-b-c-b...

I wrote these lines a few minutes back while writing on another thread...they didn't seem to fit in anywhere..coz they hardly make sense...can anyone complete the thought and continue??

The sweetness of the sweet nothings
Dreams that never were real
A feeling that never grew
A thought that disappeared...

[adilyoussef]

Fades out with time and soon
Forgotten and we're thrown in doom.
Feelings that once were shared
And now slowly died.

[smilingtearz]

Memories rush into the mind
taunting, tormenting past...
Why did Time play this game?
To take away all the first, the last...

[geetanjali]

Hey I am getting to love your poetry smilingtearz & adilyoussef partnering is great. I am busy till the coming weekend. I'll continue after that if situation permits.

[adilyoussef]

And throw me alone in a place
Far away without help and grace
Thought are killing me
Slowly, and no one helped me

[smilingtearz]

I did try to call out..
A ray of hope I'd seen...
But my cries were all stifled
My tears all Unseen...

[smilingtearz]

Hey I am getting to love your poetry smilingtearz & adilyoussef partnering is great. I am busy till the coming weekend. I'll continue after that if situation permits.


thanx...guess i shud make adil my poetry partner...:D

Would my prayers be heard..
who'd hear me weep..
I've lost my joys,
My peaceful sleep...

[adilyoussef]

Without Thy help I'm lost
In torture and can't sleep
Reddemption I ask
For a heart wounded so deep

[smilingtearz]

This wound hath no cure...
I seek, I search for thee
I'm sure thou art around,
and I cry "Help me!"...

[Scheherazade]

'My eyes, my eyes', I cry
'These fonts, these colours are killing me!'

:p

[smilingtearz]

'My eyes, my eyes', I cry
'These fonts, these colours are killing me!'

:p

Do u want me to change the color scheher?? :D

would this do??

Save me, Help i cry!
The darkness killing me
im broken deep inside
but i still call out to thee...

[adilyoussef]

Begging I'm on my knees
Crying I ask you pleese
Relieve my hear from sorrow
And pardon it for being hollow

[smilingtearz]

I haven't yet lost faith or hope
i wait to see you beside
and relieve, pardon me...
the pain..my guilt...decide...

[adilyoussef]

I've never been good
And in front of Thee I stood
Asking with tears
your pardon with fear

[smilingtearz]

I wish you knew
how i need you with me
Comforting words that say
You have forgiven me...

[adilyoussef]

Then from sad to glad
I'll change, and no more
I'll ask from Thee,
For you'll make me happy

[smilingtearz]

a happiness that's eternal
beautiful, divine
and youll stay beside me
forever mine...

[adilyoussef]

Mine and yours we shall be
Two but one all will see
United and never appart
And with happiness jumped my heart