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b
10-07-2003, 01:43 PM
will we soon know of(?)
new people starting new posts
without new replies?
den
10-07-2003, 05:19 PM
without new replies
what on earth could it all mean
i am jack's smirking revenge
AbdoRinbo
10-08-2003, 04:37 AM
I am Jack's smirking revenge
Or, simply, 'Crabcakes', as I'm
Known to my Mother.
Jay
10-08-2003, 07:12 AM
Okay Den, first I see you scorning Shea that there should be 5 syllables, then it's 7, so is it 5, 7, 5? Gotta go... classes in... oh cr**, three minutes ago... I told you yesterday, no posting during school... you thing the teacher's gonna notice I'm late? He would I'm afraid...
den
10-08-2003, 07:31 AM
Yes Jay I posted this in my initial post to my haiku thread...


Haiku:
1. A Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.
Shea
10-08-2003, 08:12 AM
known to my mother
the meaning of confusion
but where are we now?

[I missed something, why did we start a new thread?]
AbdoRinbo
10-08-2003, 01:54 PM
But where are we now?
Herman the German, stop yer
Fussin' and squirmin'.
Shea
10-08-2003, 02:04 PM
Fussin' and squirmin'
as Twain educates us all
seems few understand
b
10-08-2003, 02:26 PM
Seems few understand
That I like my martini
Shaken and not stirred
AbdoRinbo
10-08-2003, 02:37 PM
Shaken and not stirred
It's strange, he likes to jostle
His beverages.
b
10-08-2003, 06:32 PM
His beverages
By which he drowns his sorrows,
Cares that weigh on him
Shea
10-09-2003, 08:00 AM
cares that weigh on him
will soon pass through life and time
all will mean nothing
b
10-09-2003, 03:05 PM
All will mean nothing
"Also" sprach Zarathustra
Nihilism died
AbdoRinbo
10-09-2003, 04:19 PM
Nihilism died
Sorry, I mistook sorrow
For a jostling.
Shea
10-09-2003, 05:37 PM
for a jostling
what will we do? Attention
is the gold of most
Jay
10-10-2003, 04:25 AM
Is the gold of most
Gold of all the other guys?
And what if it's not?

Hey Den, hope you like my 5, 7, 5 :D
b
10-10-2003, 04:58 AM
And what if it's not?
Solipsism will conquer
Implosion of self
AbdoRinbo
10-10-2003, 12:30 PM
Implosion of self
Into the interior,
A burning silence
AbdoRinbo
10-10-2003, 12:31 PM
A burning silence
Into the exterior,
A quiet pleasure
AbdoRinbo
10-10-2003, 12:32 PM
A quiet pleasure
Of the excluded middle,
A blank fulfillment.
Jay
10-10-2003, 02:38 PM
:D Abdo, got your muses awakened? :D
b
10-10-2003, 03:41 PM
A blank fulfillment
As Abe Rhyno does now show
Surrounded by Bards
Isagel
10-10-2003, 07:17 PM
Surrounded by bards
I´m counting five-seven-five
The haiku is done.
den
10-11-2003, 08:40 AM
You got it Jay ;)

The haiku is done.
Never! I will bemoan this
fight poets, fight on
b
10-11-2003, 10:51 AM
Fight poets, fight on
Kick those bohemian bards:
Push pens in their hearts
Jay
10-11-2003, 11:03 AM
:D thanks Den :D

Push pens in their hearts
You could even use a quill
Would be messy, right?
b
10-11-2003, 01:09 PM
Would be messy, right?
Kindda, sort of, like, cliché
Dull American?
Jay
10-11-2003, 01:50 PM
Hey Bart ;)

Dull American?
With all the other nation's
Representants of...

Hope it's permissible :rolleyes:
b
10-12-2003, 06:35 AM
Hey Jay ;)

Representants of...
Straightforwardness, Empire
All on the same line?
Jay
10-12-2003, 06:54 AM
All on the same line?
Is that even possible?
It looks like it is.

;) :D ;)
den
10-14-2003, 04:21 PM
It looks like it is
but was it really all there?
conundrum drains me
Jay
10-15-2003, 05:21 AM
Conundrum drains me
Some books bore me to death
What then I have left?
Shea
10-15-2003, 08:43 AM
what then I have left
when the well runs dry or have
we just poisoned it?
b
10-17-2003, 06:43 PM
We just poisoned it
With green venom, ages old:
Ignorance, Silence
Isagel
10-20-2003, 09:51 AM
Ignorance, silence
cold like early autumn frost
freezes tender words
Shea
10-20-2003, 10:12 AM
freezes tender words
like that stuck-up teacher who
makes you feel just dolt. :x
b
10-20-2003, 11:57 AM
makes you feel just dolt
no bolt can hurt, no quiver,
except plunged in love
den
10-22-2003, 09:21 PM
except plunged in love
accept faith in the nonsense
expect more for naught
b
10-24-2003, 08:46 AM
expect more for naught
"Also" Sprach Zarathustra:
Nihilism died.

[this is redundant, I know. (That's the whole point.)]
b
10-26-2003, 07:27 AM
Nihilism died;
Nazi's fled by boat, by plane
To southern places.
Ickmeister
10-27-2003, 06:05 PM
To southern places
we all fly away. cry, die
painful, thoughtless rage
b
10-27-2003, 07:54 PM
Painful, thoughtless rage
Foolishly chasing the sun;
Meltdown of Plato.

[the second line is quoted from a poem by a friend of mine, referred to as Giacomo Steef, or Stephen Dedalus.]
TheFifthElement
07-26-2008, 02:15 PM
Meltdown of Plato
burn the old philosophers
evacuate soul
TheFifthElement
08-06-2008, 03:46 AM
evacuate soul
a near life experience -
fasten your seat belt.
barbara0207
08-09-2008, 05:06 PM
Fasten your seat belt -
time flies faster and faster
the older you get.
TheFifthElement
08-10-2008, 05:06 AM
the older you get
the closer you get to death -
I am Joe's big mouth