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Nightshade

11-11-2005, 11:37 AM

I missed ths so here is a new one anyone who doesnt know you need to ask yes or no q to find out whats missing

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A girl is dead in the bathroom, there is a thing (box??) of dental floss on the floor

:D

samercury

11-11-2005, 06:53 PM

How old is she? (is it relevent?)
Was it suicide?

Nightshade

11-11-2005, 06:57 PM

Yes its relevant but only as a catgory ( yes or no qs only)
No not suicide

papayahed

11-11-2005, 06:58 PM

was the box open?
Did she regularly floss?
Was it night or day? Is that relevant?
Is she in the bathtub?
Is there water running?
Was she murdered?

Nightshade

11-11-2005, 07:01 PM

was the box open?
Did she regularly floss?
Was it night or day? Is that relevant?
Is she in the bathtub?
Is there water running?
Was she murdered?

yes
yes
umm evening not really relevant though (Edit ok it is too relevant in a way)
No she is not in the tub
yes!
yes!
you know I did this one because I expected the fav q in the begining
:D

papayahed

11-11-2005, 07:03 PM

you know I did this one because I expected the fav q in the begining
:D

my Bad, Did she have any clothes on???
Was there music playing?

Scheherazade

11-11-2005, 07:05 PM

Was she poisoned?
Was the floss instrumental in her murder?

Nightshade

11-11-2005, 07:06 PM

hehe no she had no clothes on
and yes ther is music playing
no she wasnt poisened
yues the flossis the murder instrument!
now i think about it it is relevant that it was at night!

papayahed

11-12-2005, 12:50 PM

Was she strangled with the floss?
Was she married?
Is the shower running or the bathtub? or the sink?
Was she brushing her teeth when she was murdered?
Is there a window in the bathroom?

Nightshade

11-12-2005, 01:34 PM

Was she strangled with the floss?
yes

Was she married?
no

Is the shower running or the bathtub? or the sink?
sink

Was she brushing her teeth when she was murdered?
no

Is there a window in the bathroom?
irrelevant :D

Anon22

11-12-2005, 02:37 PM

Was her head in the sink?
Did she drown in the sink?
Was it in a public bathroom?
Was it in her own bathroom?
Was she a teenager?(you said category, so I simply assume it is relevant)

Nightshade

11-12-2005, 05:22 PM

Was her head in the sink?
nope

Did she drown in the sink?
nope

Was it in a public bathroom?
there are showers and baths in public bathrooms??

Was it in her own bathroom?
yes!

Was she a teenager?(you said category, so I simply assume it is relevant)
yes!

Anon22

11-12-2005, 05:41 PM

there are showers and baths in public bathrooms??

Lol, woops, forgot that. :lol: that'd be funny though... actually kind of creepy o.o

um... is her murderer trying to get revenge? Was she the type of girl who was outgoing? Was she the silent type? is that relevant?

Nightshade

11-12-2005, 05:44 PM

Lol, woops, forgot that. :lol: that'd be funny though... actually kind of creepy o.o
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I quite agree plus there the fact that shes wearing no clothes :S

[QUOTE]um... is her murderer trying to get revenge?
Nt qute the right wording for me to say yes im afraid

Was she the type of girl who was outgoing?
no:D

Was she the silent type?
yes

is that relevant?
yes!

Scheherazade

11-12-2005, 08:25 PM

Was the killer related to the DG?

Nightshade

11-12-2005, 08:29 PM

Was the killer related to the DG?
yup

:D this is too short:D:D:D

Anon22

11-12-2005, 08:56 PM

Did someone ask her(finally) to hang out with him/her/them?
Was there a fight between her and her killer?
Was it an accident?
Was there water on the floor? Is that relevant?
Did she slip on the water?
Were her parents there?

Nightshade

11-12-2005, 08:59 PM

Did someone ask her(finally) to hang out with him/her/them?
yes and then agin no but it is relevant Expand on this idea abit

Was there a fight between her and her killer?
OOO yes!

Was it an accident?
strangling somone with dental floss an accident! how is that possible- No on second thoughts I do not want to know!

Was there water on the floor? Is that relevant?
Nope and nope

Did she slip on the water?
nooo :D

keep going you are circling the right theme:D

Basil

11-12-2005, 09:13 PM

Was the dental floss mint-flavored, or cinnamon-flavored?

Anon22

11-12-2005, 10:33 PM

strangling somone with dental floss an accident! how is that possible- No on second thoughts I do not want to know!

Lol, That's what I'm wondering! XD :lol: I was just wondering because I was watching CSI the other day and how a little kid accidently killed his young brother by suffocating him.

Were her parents there?

Nightshade

11-13-2005, 11:10 AM

Was the dental floss mint-flavored, or cinnamon-flavored?
Would it make a diiferance? It had no flavour it was ecxpensive unflavoured proffesional Floss

Her parents were not there

Anon22

11-13-2005, 11:57 AM

Was one of her siblings there? is s/he the killer?
Considering the fact that she was a teenager and her parents weren't there, was she holding a party at her own house?(I would assume not because she was the silent type)
If she didn't, did her sibling?
Assuming her sibling did, and considering the fact she was a silent type, she probably liked trusting her parents and felt uncomfortable holding a party, is that one of the reasons they fought?

Nightshade

11-18-2005, 04:59 AM

Was one of her siblings there? is s/he the killer?
yes :nod:

Considering the fact that she was a teenager and her parents weren't there, was she holding a party at her own house?(I would assume not because she was the silent type)
nope

If she didn't, did her sibling?
nope

Assuming her sibling did, and considering the fact she was a silent type, she probably liked trusting her parents and felt uncomfortable holding a party, is that one of the reasons they fought?
nope

Anon22

11-18-2005, 05:53 PM

Considering the stereotypical thought that all silent kids are smart, was her sibling jealous?
Or rather was her sibling jealous period?
Was her sibling the outgoing type? relevant?
Are they twins? Relevant?(highly doubt this q is though)
does the fact that it was dental floss mean anything?
Then again there was a fight... I would assume it wouldn't have any meaning, just a wrong place/time type thing.
Is there a dentist included in the story? lol.(One of her parents perhaps)

Nightshade

11-18-2005, 06:01 PM

Considering the stereotypical thought that all silent kids are smart, was her sibling jealous?
ok Im going to forgive you because I dont think Ive been on the rampage about steryotyping, assuming and presuming recently :D it has nothing to do with smarts but yes jealousy is involved
Or rather was her sibling jealous period?
yupp about covers it but the reason for the jealousy is relvant-ish

Was her sibling the outgoing type too? I sibling is out going

Are they twins? Relevant?
nope and nope

does the fact that it was dental floss mean anything?
yes

Then again there was a fight... I would assume it wouldn't have any meaning.
Is there a dentist included in the story? lol.(One of her parents perhaps) never said there was a fight did I? yup there is a dentist in a way but hes not called a dentist and that is a major hint!
:D
EDIT Ahh I thionlk some of Pens phrase apply to me! Yes I did say there was a fight but thats not the dirrect cause of her death and I also said that she wasnt outgoing.

Anon22

11-18-2005, 06:07 PM

oh yeah, sorry, the writing does reflect a writer's thoughts, so I guess I did in a way call you a stereo-type without realizing ^_^' yeah, sorry 'bout that. You kind of did say there was a fight though, looked relevant as well ^^' well anyhow. Anyhow, what type of dentist isn't called a dentist?
a dentist in-training?
was her sibling the dentist?
I'd assume that'd make him older, right?
Since you said there was a fight, but it wasn't the cause of her death, I can only assume that there was a fight, but earlier in the day or week or perhaps month. Right?

I accidently added the "too" in one of my questions by accident ("Is the sibling outgoing too?") ^^

papayahed

11-18-2005, 06:13 PM

oh, did the DG wear braces?
Was the sibling jealous because a boy asked DG out?
Was the sibling jealous because the sibling wore braces?
Is there an orthodontist involved?
Did the DG own a water pik?
Is the fact that there's music playing relevent?

Nightshade

11-19-2005, 08:23 AM

a dentist in-training?
Nope

was her sibling the dentist?
nope

I'd assume that'd make him older, right?
wrong reson but yes older

Since you said there was a fight, but it wasn't the cause of her death, I can only assume that there was a fight, but earlier in the day or week or perhaps month. Right?

nope :D

oh, did the DG wear braces?
yes and yet no

Was the sibling jealous because a boy asked DG out?
yes

Was the sibling jealous because the sibling wore braces?
in a word yes

Is there an orthodontist involved?
yes and no

Did the DG own a water pik?
a who-y?

Is the fact that there's music playing relevent?
not really really but yes as well
:D

Anon22

11-20-2005, 12:13 PM

Nope

nope

wrong reson but yes older

nope :D

yes and yet no

yes

in a word yes

yes and no

a who-y?

not really really but yes as well
:D

Hmmm...:

Was the guy who the DG the "dentist"?
Was the type of music that was playing one that you would here in a dentist place?

If he was... then this is what happened(so far perhaps):

Guy asked DG out. Sibling gets jealous. They have a fight. Sibling kills DG with floss sort of as a way of saying that she hates the DG for dating the "dentist"

Nightshade

11-20-2005, 12:39 PM

Hmmm...:

[QUOTE]Was the guy who the DG the "dentist"?
nope

Was the type of music that was playing one that you would here in a dentist place?
nope

If he was... then this is what happened(so far perhaps):

Guy asked DG out. Sibling gets jealous. They have a fight. Sibling kills DG with floss sort of as a way of saying that she hates the DG for dating the "dentist"

The floss is symbolic and sow of the rest is right but as a whole you guessed it
Nope :D

Anon22

11-20-2005, 02:39 PM

[QUOTE=DigitalCrash]Hmmm...:

nope

nope

The floss is symbolic and sow of the rest is right but as a whole you guessed it
Nope :D

oh darn, lol, oh well:

is the "dentist" related to the DG?
is the "dentist" related to the guy who asked the DG out?

Nightshade

11-21-2005, 11:17 AM

[QUOTE=Nightshade]

oh darn, lol, oh well:

is the "dentist" related to the DG?
is the "dentist" related to the guy who asked the DG out?
no the dentisit is an orthadontist by the way I think we need a summary or whatever its called thing:D

Scheherazade

11-26-2005, 06:50 PM

When are we getting the summary?

Nightshade

11-27-2005, 04:02 AM

oh right well, fine now then !
DG (when she was alive)
she is a teenager
The quiet sort
she is a regular flosser
someone asked her to go out with him which is relevant!
She had a fight with the sibling to do with this boy^^
The death
she was strangled with the dental floss
her killer is an older sibling
She is naked in the bathrroom and there is music

The killer (aka the sibling)
Is older
is jealous period
is outgoing
sibling wheres braces which is one cause of jealousy.

The floss
just normal run of the mill denatl floss.
Is symbolic

The Dentist
is an orthadontist and is only relevant so far as hatred and braces are involved which I think youbve got covered already.

:D
There !!

Anon22

11-30-2005, 09:39 PM

Are the parents involved?
I assume the sibling is both jealous of the braces and the guy. M'iright?
Hmm... do the braces somehow make her prettier(the DG)?
So once she got the braces did she become more noticable?
Being used to being noticable, is that why the sibling became jealous?

Nightshade

12-01-2005, 08:09 AM

Are the parents involved?
no

I assume the sibling is both jealous of the braces and the guy. M'iright?
the DG didnt have braces the sibling/killer does
:D but ye sto the guy

Hmm... do the braces somehow make her prettier(the DG)?
dg is prettier yes

So once she got the braces did she become more noticable?
Oh look above^^^

Being used to being noticable, is that why the sibling became jealous?
In a word yes!!

FallenMegami

12-02-2005, 06:49 PM

Nightshade

12-03-2005, 01:42 PM

so the older sibling is used to getting all the attention, but her sister is, and she's mad. So she murdered her sister in the bathroom, knowing that she was a regular flosser. is that right so far?
as for the music, is that really revelant at all? :santasmil
Ok thats about it but not quite.
You havent said how she manged to kill her and why the floss.
yupp music is relevant to why she was murdered in the bathroom and on this paticular day.

pintsizepete

12-10-2005, 07:26 AM

Was she murdered on a holiday?
If so, is the music symbolic of this holiday?
Is her being naked instrumental to solving this?
Does the sister live with the dead girl?
Did the sister get the braces recently? Is this relevant?

Nightshade

12-10-2005, 10:10 AM

Was she murdered on a holiday?
no

If so, is the music symbolic of this holiday?
no

Is her being naked instrumental to solving this?
not particullayly no

Does the sister live with the dead girl?
yep

Did the sister get the braces recently? Is this relevant?
no and yes

:D

pintsizepete

12-11-2005, 06:18 AM

music is relevant to why she was killed in the bathroom and on this particular day...

Hmmm.... Is the music the radio? Is it a cd? Does it matter?
Does she play a certain type of music when she uses the bathroom?
Is the day important because of the calendar date?
Was the dead girl getting ready for her date when she was killed?

Anon22

12-17-2005, 03:47 PM

Bumpity Bump

Lil Stras 007

01-23-2007, 09:25 PM

Okay.. the sister( I am gussesing it is a girl) has really bad teeth and is ugly. She has braces and is an orthodontist because she had so many problems with her teeth. She has no friends and everyone makes fun of her. Her younger sister is pretty and has perfect teeth. She gets a boy friend and the older sister is really jealous. As an orthodontist, she tells her sister to floss all the time, and since she lives with her knows when she flosses. While the sister is getting ready for a shower or bath (reason for the nudeness) and begins to floss her teeth, the older sister comes in and strangles her.