Can someone proofread this.

[JAG05Z28]

Can someone please proofread this for me its due tomorrow and I really have to make good on this paper. I'm not very good at writing so I need all the help I can get. Thanks ahead of time.

[Rosalind]

It's a nice piece, but I made a few corrections. Also, I don't know how your teacher feels about contractions and other casual things in writing. If she wants a more formal paper, then you'll want to clean those up, but as it is it's a nice personal paper.

I have no idea how to work this proof reading program, so please bear with me!

[JAG05Z28]

She said since its a personal narritive we could use contractions and it didnt have to be formal.

[Rosalind]

Lovely. That's more fun, anyhow.