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Zippy
10-10-2005, 11:12 AM
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Darlin
10-10-2005, 03:39 PM
Wow! Very, very nice! I really like this. I love the descriptive opening paragraph that leads you to think of happy times, enabling the second paragraph to really capture you. You made this seem so real. Excellent job.

Kaltrina
10-11-2005, 07:11 AM
here is me, with my mouth open, full of emotions and admiring another beautiful peace of your work. thank you for the enjoyment you give to us when we read your works. :) ;)