indian123
09-06-2003, 11:19 AM
waiting for your criticisms
My First Crush
As the twilight coloured my ambience
i strolled through that unforgettable lane
where i lost my heart
which i never found again
She had sparkling eyes
blended with innocence of a deer
which made my heart sing a song
which she could not hear
As my eyes floated through her oceanic eyes
her face erupted in a luminous smile
a smile for which i could have
travelled a thousand mile
Ended the lane, came night
with extasy, we were in moonlight
day ended, the next evening came
searching for my heart, i went back to the lane
My angelic queen was standing there
wearing starlight in her hair
mysterious looks, digging deep in my heart
as i looked, i forgot all my words
Days passed, weeks passed, months passed
talking to her was touching the stars
thought of burning my passion on a paper
born was this poem, will a relationship be born.
My First Crush
As the twilight coloured my ambience
i strolled through that unforgettable lane
where i lost my heart
which i never found again
She had sparkling eyes
blended with innocence of a deer
which made my heart sing a song
which she could not hear
As my eyes floated through her oceanic eyes
her face erupted in a luminous smile
a smile for which i could have
travelled a thousand mile
Ended the lane, came night
with extasy, we were in moonlight
day ended, the next evening came
searching for my heart, i went back to the lane
My angelic queen was standing there
wearing starlight in her hair
mysterious looks, digging deep in my heart
as i looked, i forgot all my words
Days passed, weeks passed, months passed
talking to her was touching the stars
thought of burning my passion on a paper
born was this poem, will a relationship be born.