perfect

[alissa]

in this warped maze
perfection is promising
a contagious craze thats wrongly worshipping
a twisted image, a distorted ideal
a sacralidge thats forgotten how to feel
blindly we follow this malignant belief
that appearance prevails over whats underneath
and this cult, it conforms
it preaches false hope
a suffocating storm that vicitimizes and gropes
our sick souls
possessed by these hands
that shape us and mold us and restrict us to this land
of superficial hell.

[den]

There's some great ALliteration going on here ALissa... hey I bet you'd do good in the Haiku thread too! Give it a try?

[AbdoRinbo]

She's clever, isn't she?

[alissa]

Thank you Den! I've never written a Haiku but theres no harm in trying.

Abdo~ am i sensing some sarcasm?