ryokan
08-20-2003, 08:54 PM
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if my poems, as "admin" said, sound as if they should be read aloud, I have removed all punctuation from some _to allow the words themselves to create rhythm_
all lone and lonesome would they can they not should
read them aloud alone and know the deepest essence permissable in this drunken sophistic age nescient winkhooded aught we ask some questions of the Masters jumblehuddled unraveltime dement to come whump falumptelevised dewisened to the end on endeverdetermine the hazard about to obescient bend
if my poems, as "admin" said, sound as if they should be read aloud, I have removed all punctuation from some _to allow the words themselves to create rhythm_
all lone and lonesome would they can they not should
read them aloud alone and know the deepest essence permissable in this drunken sophistic age nescient winkhooded aught we ask some questions of the Masters jumblehuddled unraveltime dement to come whump falumptelevised dewisened to the end on endeverdetermine the hazard about to obescient bend