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SilverRain
08-18-2003, 03:03 AM
When pictures starts to move in
I turn the other way
When all my books are empty
I don't know what to say

One day up and one day down, one lie slowly touch the ground

I'll never touched the future
So don't tell em no liesA suite that never suited you
You're cracking up inside

One lie slowly hit the ground, one lie slowly touched the sound of..

Delirious, serious delirious

A tear is just a vision
of what I never said.
My dream is just a mirror
of a wasted life in bed

One day up and one day down, one lie slowly touch the ground

Delirious, serious delirious


I'm losing control, I'm lost in time, I'm fire, I'm snow
A burning pain fills my heart, a bleeding mixtured life without the rain
I'm with out the rain

Phoenix_Tears
08-18-2003, 12:43 PM
Your poem fits the mood i am in right now, from what i made of it.

A tear is just a vision
of what I never said.
My dream is just a mirror
of a wasted life in bed

Mostly this part. I just finished a book(part one ina series) called "sweep-part 1 book of shadows" really good. took two hours to read. only about 200 pages,

-Phoen-x

SilverRain
08-18-2003, 01:16 PM
Thank you, Phoenix!

I had 'one of those days' type of day, should've stayed in bed...

Phoenix_Tears
08-18-2003, 01:26 PM
funny, i did stay in bed, i am typing from its edge..

alissa
08-28-2003, 01:43 PM
this is an awesome poem. i love "a tear is just a vision of what was never said..." you put that in such a perfect way. that might be one of my favorite lines i've read.