SleepyWitch
05-29-2005, 06:34 AM
Hi everyone,
this is the beginning of a random chapter from my novel... well, so far i've got 3 complete chapters... the first gives you the situation towards the end of the story (it's like a frame) and the other 2 take you to the beginning of it... (one of them is around in another thread, "my novel chapter 2") or something...
the following is set much later, but i had to write it now coz i had this funny idea and i didn't want to let it go to waste....) so.. what i'm trying to say is, don't worry too much about who the characters are... the main character of the novel is called ANNA, but this chapter starts with the description of one of her colleagues. i know it's very detailed and a lot of information... BUT, the whole book itself is gonna be a lot less direct and will leave lots of blanks for the readers to come up with their own interpretations (at least that's what i hope).
so, if the description of this character makes your head reel, don't worry coz this kind of characterization will be an exception... so just tell me if the character is convincing and how you like her... :) THANKS A LOT :)
this is the beginning of a random chapter from my novel... well, so far i've got 3 complete chapters... the first gives you the situation towards the end of the story (it's like a frame) and the other 2 take you to the beginning of it... (one of them is around in another thread, "my novel chapter 2") or something...
the following is set much later, but i had to write it now coz i had this funny idea and i didn't want to let it go to waste....) so.. what i'm trying to say is, don't worry too much about who the characters are... the main character of the novel is called ANNA, but this chapter starts with the description of one of her colleagues. i know it's very detailed and a lot of information... BUT, the whole book itself is gonna be a lot less direct and will leave lots of blanks for the readers to come up with their own interpretations (at least that's what i hope).
so, if the description of this character makes your head reel, don't worry coz this kind of characterization will be an exception... so just tell me if the character is convincing and how you like her... :) THANKS A LOT :)