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[firestarter]

this is a poem of mine in which i am not sure why i wrote it.

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This is
What we believe
In death, suicide, rose
The blushing forgiveness of one
True crime

[Arteum]

This is bad.

[Phoenix_Tears]

Arteum i despise you as you may already know. But let me now say that if your going to tell someone their work is bad, than at LEAST have the decency to tell them why! Or tell me now, why is it you feel in the right to criticise someone else's work when you cannot share one of your own for fear of a reply similar to "This is bad". i think it is weak and ignorant.

[Admin]

I don't think any poetry, if written from the heart, can be bad.

[ryokan]

8) The ego is a harsh master,
demanding and demanding;
sinister its norm; hidden tone,
alone among delusions lost
in human time before history.
Before history. Before.
Heartbeats all creatures to
Live and shrive and make new
generation.
Before ego, our kin lived
silken like all creation,
attuned to the greater good,
each and every microsecond,
creating and moving and living, sans notice.
The story of the Four
Harmonious Friends has not
gone past Bhutan.

The ancient world lives on;
though we are too ego-bound
to notice the blue blue
horizon, calling.

Dame Nature awaits us still.

[firestarter]

well well, lol... i dont think i can say i have had replys as bold as

This is bad.

i would be more than willing to discuss why you feel that way arteum.

firestarter

[Phoenix_Tears]

I completely agree with Admin. Arteum i believe owes Firestarter an apology, but as i never got one, i doubt he will give one. Bold had nothing to do with it. I am being awfully immature in saying this, but rightn now i do not care.

Ciao,
Phoen-x

[firestarter]

well all i can say is that i have had worse criticizims, than -this is bad- which i find rather amusing. perhaps it is, i'm not so sure myself
firestarter