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[Rebecca]

This book had some interesting points, but overall it was hard to sort through the unneded plots. I understand the point that Voltaire is attempting, but feel as though he could have used a better editor.

[lghtrlov]

I'm not sure editing services were as readily available in 1759..."mais il faut cultiver notre jardin." ;)
Seriously, though, why do you think it could have used editing? Would you have cut something out, for example, or is it actually a matter of grammer/syntax?