Phoenix_Tears
08-16-2003, 11:45 AM
Looking back on all i've done
It all just seems like a bunch of nothing
I just slept all day and hid away from everyone i knew
Thats what led to this solitude and haunting pain i feel
But now i do not know, how to show that i want to talk again
Aye aye aye.. sorry firestarter but this not rhymning thing is killing me.
this is how i would normally write this, tell me which sounds better.
Looking back on all i've done and all that i wanted to do
I just slept all day and hid away from everything i knew
It paved the way to the way i am now and the haunting pain i feel
But yet i do not know how to get real
Everything i did compared to all i wanted to do
Will always be nothing, for that was all i could make of it-
It all just seems like a bunch of nothing
I just slept all day and hid away from everyone i knew
Thats what led to this solitude and haunting pain i feel
But now i do not know, how to show that i want to talk again
Aye aye aye.. sorry firestarter but this not rhymning thing is killing me.
this is how i would normally write this, tell me which sounds better.
Looking back on all i've done and all that i wanted to do
I just slept all day and hid away from everything i knew
It paved the way to the way i am now and the haunting pain i feel
But yet i do not know how to get real
Everything i did compared to all i wanted to do
Will always be nothing, for that was all i could make of it-