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-meg
05-24-2005, 06:07 PM
I thought the above comment had some interesting points. I do agree that the language was somewhat difficult to weed through at times. His sentences seemed to take rabbit trails. The story overall, however, was worth the effort. While it did not leave me feeling especially joyful, I can appreciate the lesson it imparts. I see it in others and in myself, that I go through life missing the important things. James has a viable point to get across - and he does, with intelligence (if it was somewhat verbose). For those of you still working on finishing it, keep on!