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ryokan
08-02-2003, 07:09 PM
And now upon the barren shore,
your footprints lead away.
I look where there is no horizon
Stunned by silence. None will
stay.

Where once embraces fulsome
wide,
Did play upon the strand so
clear,
There - is only rising tide,
Swirling sand - nothing dear.

Long days agone; longer nights,
I waited patient, pilgrim-bright.
Woven reeds and florid sight
Became my solace, single
right.

The years have flown.
They've taken dreams.
I'm left here, only words alone,
And desires most; oft' not what seems.

The silence is gentle, at last.
The dream has come to pass....
Nothing left but this:
Reed woven ring and bliss.

Phoenix_Tears
08-03-2003, 12:06 AM
i cannot criticize your work, for it surpasses my own, but i find something about your words that hits something deep inside of me, though i have yet to learn what it is.
-Phoen-X

ryokan
08-03-2003, 02:12 AM
Thanks Phoenix. Keep faith in what lies deep inside the heart. It will, one day, be revealed. I promise you.
Peace and happiness,
Ryokan