First post here...'Pain'

[Lady_S]

the cool rain falls to calm my face,
where the acid tears have carved grooves down my cheeks

this fatal poison has invaded my system,
careening down my throat and into my soul

i scream for mercy,
but this sickness knows no end

the terror is ceaseless and brutal,
my cries are oblivious to its immortal ear

save me, someone, from this hellish fate,
secure me and love me, before it's too late.


This is really old, but I guess it's okay...reply if ye like

[Phoenix_Tears]

Yey!!
everyone meet my bestest friend. i love this poem 'she" wrote.
Yak now ravin i had it in my newsthingy i started and gave up on. it was gay idea. lol
~Phoen-x~

[Lady_S]

yeah, i remember that...

[Phoenix_Tears]

it was fun.. but.. lol yeah.. it was a gay thingy

[tear_killer]

it sorta sounds like that one phoenix_tears wrote. that's cool

[Phoenix_Tears]

i simply drew inspiration from my great friends poem. but our styles similar yeah.
~Phoen-x

[tear_killer]

i thought you said all of your poems were your own....disapointing

[Phoenix_Tears]

aww you contradict me tear killer. it is my own poem. lady s is but my bestest friend. her poem inspired me as do many songs and etc. i like her wording. she helped me along.
now whats that quote by newton?

[tear_killer]

what i mean you dont get inspired by other poems..what the hell do you mean newton

[Phoenix_Tears]

Err i have no idea..........
Newton had a quote. something about standing on the shoulders of giants..lol
i am lost....someone find me....lol
~Phoen-x