the word-poem

[tear_killer]

The word

the word should had never been said,
but it has been said,
Because the word can make you cry,
the word can make you cring,
the word can make you sworm,
the word can burn you alive,
the word life threating,
the wordis sin to say,
the word can kill you,
the word will eat your soul alive,
the word will send you to hell,
the word is killer virus,
the word make you feel like a thousand knives killing you slowly,
the word you should never mutter is mine.

[Phoenix_Tears]

I applaud your efforts tear killer! Ii reallt really like this poem! it is one that i will forever remember. calls to mind that songh're is the love'-by the black eyed peas-bravo bravo!

[tear_killer]

not one person has replyed 2 any of my poems, except phonix_tears(which is a cool name) sooooooooooooo tell me if my poems are good are not since i just started writing here the first day i have been here.

[Nevolia]

hey i like ur poem, sort of, itz pretty kool...sounds very passionate tho.
Wait i mean thatz a good thing.. i luv passion..kudos 2 u man :D

[tear_killer]

tanx

[Jay]

I like your poem a lot, you have this thing with words... ;)

[right_and_gone]

hay i never replied to your poem? my bad.... it is good... reminds me of how i feel when i write my own poems