need some help!!!

[Phoenix_Tears]

see, i have these lines, for the end of a poem.. but i cannot write a beginning...

I see her eyes all over the sky
Her hair in the dancing flames
something something something
This is my woe
For her a thousand names

I am trying to write from the point of view of a guy. lost love. that kinda mumbo jumbo. my friends wanted me to write a few love like poems. So i am setting out to be better at those, please hellp!!!!!!
- desperate,well not really-

[tear_killer]

I see her,
I freeze
I try to speak,
Nothing comes out


it nots the best i can do...but i dont know what your looking for

[Phoenix_Tears]

finally a reply, i have been wondering if anyone would chance to reply. thank you for thinking i have an odd taste in poetry. it's not the first time i have heard that! i have yet to read your poem, i saw it, but i cannot fully read and think at the moment.. kinda tired. i will asap though,
til we cross paths again-
Phoenix