Signing

[Phoenix_Tears]

- alrighty , this is a poem i signed in everyone's yearbook at my school this year.just thought i'd share.
It's been great all along-
And time goes fast
Some of the best things never last
So enjoy your time on earth
next year we can start over with a fresh rebirth
all our quarrels will seem pointless
You can have a life out of what used to be a mess
But for now take your dreams and make them real
remember that EVERYTHING is not the biggest deal
Stay true to you
In this world of sin
It won't be long til we haunt these halls again

ok.. this poem seems kinda ... mixed up and crazy to me. i started going one direction, then changed direction without a proper break-off.
COM'ON PEOPLE I NEED CRITICIZING!!!!!!!

[apstudent]

I like the poem. By reading it I am thinking that you are not graduating, am I correct? Either way, it is better than signing your name with a corny note, " It was a fun year, have a good summer." It is unique, and I applaud your creativity.

[Phoenix_Tears]

your close. but not right on target ap. i BARELY passed.my grades are as such..
chorus-a
technology-a
geography/history/s.s/civics w/e-b
science(!!!)-100 A
math-F....
english-b

i particularly enjoi science. i want to be a forensics scientist. CSI if you will.

[Eric, son of Chuck]

Science could use a good writer. Keep it up.

[Laur-n]

Keep up the good dream. Good poem too, luv the creativity. It doesn't need criticizing! :D

[tear_killer]

That was a exaltation poem, rather good if you ask me. Keep working you'll get better and better at it. Maybe you'r the next Emily D.

Phonix_tears you have differnt taste in poetry, but then again who doesnt.